Amorphous Love

This piece is an ode to our passions, that truly act as our keepers in our times of joy, despair, anxiety and sadness. I think we poets shall relate most to this piece.

Walk over and see what I’ve done,

I haven’t seen the sun rise a day.

I can see it like a reel rolls as the old movies play,

Can you too see what I have called the sun?

 

I didn’t need the air to breathe,

I wonder if there’s still a need.

Who came and sowed this seed,

Only god can find now what’s lying beneath.

 

Can you play the role again my love,

Like a broken dream on the wings of a dove.

I’ll see you fly again someday.

 

I think I’ve found what I know is true,

I can’t see or smell but I know it’s you,

In a foggy dream I’ll maybe see you in some way.

 

The misty eyes don’t lie for too long,

To give way to the tune of the dawns coming.

Like the sight of light to a man that is drowning,

You came to me softly like a cherubs’ song.

 

You found me a home to call my own,

I became yours and yours alone.

I cannot comprehend this tone,

What it is you’re playing in my heart is unknown.

 

You left once and came again,

Let this not be a trend,

I know it’s you but not this way,

And to this day, I still don’t know why.

 

Just never leave me, however you be,

You’re truly my soul and all I need on a broken day,

to be consoled and reincarnate.

 

Can you play this role again my dear,

Like a new born dream on the wings of a dove.

I’m seeing you as I leave this shore today.

 

I always knew I’ve found what’s true,

I can’t see or smell but I know it’s you,

As I open my eyes to this day, I know I’ll find a way...

Written By Roshan Nair
 Copyright © 2015 Roshan Nair

Author's Note

I started off as an painter, then moved into music to digital art, and now poetry.
Now as I look back through my journey, I realize that my most proudest as well as humblest moments have been because of my passions at each stage.

There's so much of ourselves that only our passions can bring out that conventional work or words can never think of evincing.

Reviews

[KWP]

Your words are symbolic and yes easy relatable I think when one knows passion is what nourishes the soul and nourishing the soul can bring one peace then we have more answers than most will even ever question.

I believe that in a society such as the one we have created it takes a certain strength to remain strong and stand by the side of our passions - quite often they are easily ridiculed by those that do no understand exactly where they stem from - but in the remaining stoic and within the gentle nurturing we ourselves are given the gift of understanding just that little bit more.

Your words give cause for thought and reflection, something I myself always look for in a poem - Nice One XX

[Roshan Nair]

Thank you so much for the review and im so glad you liked it :) I completely agree with your opinion, its a tough road and even tougher life to commit a 100 % to our passions. Im hoping each of us can atleast commit a portion of acceptable time to immerse ourselves in them to let our soul grow a little by little with time. cheers :)

[Saddam]

Can you play the role again my love,
Like a broken dream on the wings of a dove.
I’ll see you fly again someday.

Wonder at your penning. It is very adorable and beautiful. It not easily missed from mind. Marvelous piece.

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks saddam, im glad you liked it :) cheers

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Another masterpiece from you Roshan Nair. I love this poem a lot. The flow and the depth of the lines is do beautiful and the heartfelt.

Thanks for sharing!

-Anjana

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks anjana :)
im glad you liked the piece ..cheers!

[Deepika]

These lines were touching..
"Only god can find now what’s lying beneath."

"Like a broken dream on the wings of a dove.
I’ll see you fly again someday."

"Like a new born dream on the wings of a dove.
I’m seeing you as I leave this shore today."

Well the entire piece is worth quoting..but I stop here:P I relish your fluency with words and your thoughts! Your journey shows you are blessed with great talent. Keep up Roshan :)

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks a lot deepika, your words mean a lot to me :) Im glad you liked the phrases and quotes from the piece, your compliment is cherished :) cheers

[Jamestown]

My friend, I am so pleased you are now doing poetry! I am always amazed at the flawless
and fluent pen your poetry portrays, your imagery and word play is so unique and
captivating. I truly admire your style and love the messages
you choose to express, you definitely are in the elite at the cafe!!!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Roshan Nair]

Thank you so much for your kind appreciation my friend, It means a lot coming from someone whose work I am a great admirer of. Your words are treasured james...and it moves me to write more.cheers!

[Chris]

"The misty eyes don’t lie for too long,
To give way to the tune of the dawns coming.
Like the sight of light to a man that is drowning,
You came to me softly like a cherubs’ song."

Very nice imagery here.

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks a lot! Im glad you liked the imagery