Clouds

More often than not, in life, we are left more touched and moved for life by people and things that are ephemeral, present for a few precious moments or days ,even years,any of it seeming too short

Can you be here a minute longer?

There’s only one more number to play.

The country isn’t running anywhere.

 

If we wish, We can find our own way.

 

But we are all but leavers here.

These clouds they play to the chimes,

To the way the old ships steer.

 

My love has rested upon this clover,

We caught up before spring arrived that day.

The season seemed like it’s for the lasting.

 

If we will, We can carve out our own bay.

 

But we are dawn’s deceivers here.

The speck of mist has called my love to the sky,

To become one with the rain that washes us clear.

 

What train can we take to go farther?

Memories got no feet nor feathers nor say,

They seep down and be taken where you go.

 

If we dream, We can paint this picture as we may,

 

But we are false receivers here,

To call the coming into plains of shadows,

Of clouds that pass with no man to fear.

 

I’ll not leave this rope waiting stronger,

Will you hold on to my sounds made of clay?

They are for you to keep from now.

 

If we dare, We can climb up, in known lands to lay.

 

But we are only destiny’s chasers here,

Your touch becomes the breeze, your smiles the passing rays,

With no face familiar, the ephemeral becomes most real.

 

Written By Roshan Nair

 Copyright © 2015 Roshan Nair

Author's Note

Like clouds they drift away, leaving behind memories and feelings that keep us in times of joy and sorrow.
Please comment and let me know what you think about it :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful use of words.
"My love has rested upon this clover,
We caught up before spring arrived that day.
The season seemed like it’s for the lasting."
The poem left me with good places and thoughts. I like poetry that open doors to places in the reader's mind. This poem did. Destiny, seasons and lasting places and people keep us solid. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Roshan Nair]

Thank you john, I appreciate your review. Im glad my poem could take your mind on a journey of good thoughts and peace . cheers

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[¿]

Loved the moment while I read this....quite like a song that keeps rythm of life in every verses.....Clouds you've used brilliantly here that's relevant with our everyday life....twas a great read! Thanks for sharing :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Well... The mood i was in today and concerning the weather here-The poem was a delicious treat.With clouds now hovering above my head i could relish each word of yours.The deep message you convey here.We are but leavers-damn true.We chase our goals(its not bad).But while in rush we forget how to halt-close our eyes and breeze in the sweet moments.This beautiful lines had a serene quality in them.Which made me stop -take my time and Reflect this sage words.A wonderful write.As a lover of nature this will stay close to my heart. *keep writing*

~Sophy

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks a lot sophy, Im glad you connected so well to this piece... and yes you've gauged the meaning right, we should be glad for things that happen and even those that dont last as they both enrich us as people as we grow. cheers :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Geee... Glad i nailed it.. :) Well it was worth a read

[Chris]

The rhythm of this piece is powerful, almost mystical with the way the phrases are written.
Great use of that refrain as well. "We are ... here." Excelent

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks a lot chris, Im glad you liked the piece! I appreciate you connecting with the phrases of the poem :) cheers

[Sindu]

This is the most vivid and profound yet calming poem I read till now. You have a real promise of talent, creativity and way with the words. The images set in a unhindered descriptions of inner most desire to get there and then change so fast, not creating hope alone but also given a word of advice. Really like this one, Roshan.

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks for your kind words sindu, I really appreciate your review. It makes me glad you think so about my humble skill. I'm happy you could connect so well with the piece. Cheers :)

[child of God]

beautiful poem was a pleasure to read thank you for sharing this wonderful write :)
broken girl

[Roshan Nair]

Thank you so much :) im glad you liked it and appreciate your review

[Mayank]

I love the imagery here, the flow is very precise and leaves you with the ray of hope.

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks a lot man! glad you liked it

[R Smith]

you know Roshan this is probably the most interesting and unusual poem i have read, the last stanza is just beautiful an astounding work of poetry, you are blessed with true talent, bravo :)

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks a lot richard :) Im glad you liked the piece. I really appreciate your review my friend

[Emily]

Nice wording!
Well done!!

[Roshan Nair]

Thanks emily :)

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

A wonderful write! There are those that touch one for such a short while leaving eternal memories. Behind every moving cloud is Light

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[Roshan Nair]

I agree with your point of view to the topic Carol.
Cheers! thanks for the review :)