The Good Man.A Story by EirinnStory based on drawing of the Good Man.The legend spoke of a
good man. Jefferson Goodman, a
small but good boy put on his best suit one morning. The morning of the
incident. He did not say much. In fact, no one had heard him speak a word since
the week of the tragedy. His mother came into his room to comb his hair. He
looked into the mirror as she did so, eyeing the very movement of the brush on
his pencil-straight brown hair. He was pain-looking, he thought. A plain boy in
a plain town. “Dashing, darling,”
his mother said, very monotone. She kissed his forehead and left. She was
wearing a black dress. Jefferson’s suit and tie were also black. The day passed like
any day passes. The reception was beautiful, but the words were deep. There
were tears, there were stories, there were flowers. There was even food, which
little Jefferson had not expected. He sat on a chair in the corner of the room,
silently nibbling on some crackers and cookies he had nabbed from the food
table and stolen away in a paper napkin. Jefferson’s aunt Linda
was there. She was beefy old woman, red-faced and face. Jefferson disliked her,
because she would always pinch his cheeks and call him “Snookiekins”. But today
she did not. Today was too sad. He watched his aunt Linda talking with his
mother. Linda put her hand on his mother’s arm and gave her condolences. The father was far
away. Jefferson sat in the corner furthest away from the coffin so as not to
accidently catch a glimpse. He listened to nothing
but the nibbling sounds his mouth made as he ate cracker after cracker. That is, until he
heard a rustling sound. The sound was oh-so
faint, at first he thought he had accidently dropped his napkin on the floor.
But he looked down to his hands, and it was still on his lap. He figured the
sound was nothing in particular, and continued to nibble. But soon enough, he
heard the noise again. Golly, what was that rustling noise? Had a mouse snuck
in and decided to explore around his feet? Was there a tree outside nuzzling
against the outside wall of the building? The sound was coming
from below. It sounded so far deep below, it must be under the floor boards! Jefferson sat up
straight, scared but also excited. He leaped off his chair. The time it took
for his feet to hit the floor seemed ages, but he finally made it all the way
the wooden ground. He crawled onto his hands and knees and put his little ear
to the floorboard. Skratchy skritch skritch went the floor. Skritch skritch skratchitty skritch He felt a feeling in
his heart, a pitter panging feeling. His whole body became warm and busting
with excitement. He held his breath for a moment, to keep the warm feeling in.
Then he stood. He glanced around the room with his big brown eyes, and saw to
his good luck that no one was watching him. The adults were too sad, too chatty,
too adulty to notice the little boy, and he did not mind one bit. Now he could explore. Jefferson ran ran ran,
to the other side of the room. He flew, his little black suit rippling in the
air as he ran. He did not care if his suit ripped, or if it got dirty, or even
if it flew off and he never saw it again, because that would mean he would
never have to come back to where he was now, and he would never have to see the
big coffin-box his very own father was in, and his mother would stop combing
his hair into the shape it did not belong. The boy snuck outside,
away from the church gathering. The sound had been coming from under the
floorboards, and he figured perhaps he could dig a hole outside the wall near
that side of the building. We walked around the brick wall so that he was just
outside where he had been sitting. The ground was green and soft from the rainy
weather they’d been having. It was May, after all. Though Jefferson often
forgot things like time and dates. He dug into the soft
dirt with his hands. He ripped apart the grass, and tossed it all behind him.
His knees had patches of dirt, and he scratched his nose with his dirty fingers
so there was some mud on his face. But he did not notice nor did he care. He
dug and dug and dug. Alas, he found no path
to underneath the floorboards. After some time, he decided to give up. Just
then, as he sat down next to his muddy hole, looking defeated, he heard a noise
again. Skritch Skratch Skeech Skrim The sound was louder
than it had been before. He looked down down down, into the hole. It was far
deeper than he had thought! So deep, in fact, it fit a little boy just
Jefferson’s size. “Jefferson, come. Come to the land we all know and love. Here to be, and here to see, you’ll never want to
be above.” The voice came from
below, deep deep in the hole. Jefferson peeked down, and saw a small rat. It
was not a normal looking rat, however. It was skinny and white, and looked
quite bony. Jefferson’s eyes grew ever wider, and he became intrigued by his
new friend. Silently, he stuck his feet right down into the hole. “The Good Man awaits,”
said the rat. Jefferson fell and
fell and fell. He fell so long, he forgot which way was up, and knew not which
way was down. Secretly, he grinned, and awaited this new world. A new life for
him, it seemed. One without combs and mothers and sad affairs. He looked to his
right and saw that the skeletal rat was now resting on his shoulders. “What’s tha’ matter,
boy, do you not speak?” the rat asked, in a shrill squeaky voice. Jefferson shrugged. He
could speak, but he had forgotten how. “Well, well, the Good
Man will fix you up right away.” THUD. Jefferson and the rat
landed on a cushiony surface. What appeared to be a velvet road; red velvet
lined the floor like a path. The rest of the world was black. It was not
darkness, but rather simple blackness. As if the rest of the world did not
exist, only the red velvet road, the boy, and the rat. “My name is Panny,”
said the skeleton rat. “Follow me, please, if you will.” The rat bounded and
leaped down the velvet pathway. He was far far ahead before he turned back to
Jefferson and shouted, “Please stick to the path! Do not fall!” Jefferson silently
followed suit. He was not scared. He was never scared anymore. Not since the
incident. His father taught him well. They walked a long
way. The path seemed to be getting narrower and narrower. Smaller and smaller
and smaller, until Jefferson was only able to stand on tip toes. “My apologies, I do
forget I’m smaller than most,” chuckled the rat. “We can leap off now. The
black on this side leads to The Yard, where the Good Man lives. Don’t you want
to meet the Good Man, Jefferson?” Jefferson nodded. “Right. This way, m’boy!”
Panny leapt into the black, and Jefferson jumped right after him. He was not scared. He
was never scared. Music played around
them. Calm, soothing, melodious music. Mozart, or Beethoven, Jefferson thought.
Soothing piano tones. It was music his father had played for him once, as a
young child. He remembered it well. They fell for not as
long this time, and landed just on grass. Soft, green grass. The greenest grass
Jefferson had ever seen! The grass extended for miles and miles, as far as the
boy could see. The sky was still black, just as before. But here there was so
much more to look at. They appeared to be in
a grave yard. There were stones all around, what appeared to be tomb stones.
Some were crumbling and had been broken into many pieces. Some had green moss
growing on them. None of them had names, but what appeared to just be symbols.
Circles and squares intertwined. Triangles and swirls. Zig zags and stick
figure men. X’s and O’s. “Do not worry, we are
quite almost there,” said Panny, wagging around his stick-like white tail.
Jefferson thought it was funny. He was not scared. He
was never scared. Panny and Jefferson
bounded over one grassy hill. There, in the distance, stood a floating figure,
almost glowing in a pool of single light. Very much like a spot light. “The Good Man,” said
Panny. Jefferson stood in
front of him. The Good Man. He was hung on a wooden cross. But not quite like
the cross Jefferson had always seen in church. It was thicker. Thick enough to
hold the man’s full body. His arms and legs appeared to be nailed in, to hold
him up, but there was no blood, nor did the man seem in pain. His face was a
skull. Grim and hollow. One eye was completely emptied out, but the other had a
pearl ball inside, where the eyeball should be. Jefferson was not
scared. He was never scared. “The Good Man,” said
Panny again. Jefferson held his
hand out, stretching and stretching. He wanted to touch him. Touch his wounds,
and heal him. Touch his wooden cross and feel what the man felt. But no matter
how far he stretched his arm, he could not reach. The man moved farther and farther
away. “The Good Man.” The writing on the cross read, "Goodman". After a few hours,
Jefferson felt tired. He crawled up into a little ball on the grass and fell
asleep forever. The legend spoke of a
good man. The Good Man spoke of
nothing. © 2011 Eirinn |
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