Old flame

Old flame

A Poem by rosemary keogh

 

When I saw you through that window

My heart went boom boom boom

Holding back your sight just trilled me

As my eyes just zoom zoom zoomed

 

Oh my god I gasp for air

As I sneek out to the door

Blood is rushing from my head

Just cant believe just who I saw

 

Old flame were have you been

Its been years but now im old

Just want to run into your arms

Just like i did, when we were young

 

Our first kiss, was full of bliss

So soft and passionate.

Let me catch my breath once more

As I slowly reminise

 

I was sixteen You were to

We were as solid as gold

Two teens in love

The greatest love story ever told

 

Then the day came

When I had to go away

Mother moved so very far

She could not let me stay

 

I still have your letters

Sealed in my box of love

Although they just stopped coming

You stayed in my heart for good

 

Old flame, do I let you pass me by

Will I reget not saying hello

Would I know what to say after all this time

Dam it! im going

 

 Hello baby how are you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 rosemary keogh


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old flame always flickers, doesn't it?
v nice...................

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this the feeling of love lost, of knowing what to do in a position of re-encounter

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is nice.I like the title "Old flame".its awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, never let the what ifs win. Beautifully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes we can't resist .. even though we should .. been there ..

Sweet .. Jasmine

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww, this was sweet. And somewhat sad.. but i loved the memories in this. It's so carefree and just cute. I loved it. ^^ I enjoyed the read!

Well done!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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rosemary keogh
rosemary keogh

dublin, Ireland



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