Im walking away

 

 

Billy boy its been to long.

I think its time that we moved on.

Im just not feeling very strong.

Our tunes played out, we ruined the song.
 

 

Its been one hell! of a rollercoaster ride.

... Which has left me feeling raw inside.

"Ah stop! that Billy. Stop! that crying"

Emotional blackmail wont work this time.
 

 

Years I put up with the same owl shite.

I loved you all the same.

Something happened on the way.

Which made our love feel lame.
 

 

The toughts of your touch

sends me right out of my mind.

I never said a word, because

my heart was just to kind.
 

 

Its time for me to go now.

I need to walk away.

Its going to be so hard for us

Dont worry billy. You will thank me some day.

Reviews

[WILDERNESS]

Great, loved it........you put it so beautifully........keep it up

[MOON]

Emotional write , lovely flow.

[Sleeping Maiden]

This is heartfelt and so moving! I love it..
Sometimes we all need to walk away from that someone who put us through hell..
such a beautiful write.. i can feel the pain so well.
Wonderful write!

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

trying to uncover the ocean of love lurking probably in the most secret chamber of heart. beautiful

[Distant horizons]

beautiful, heartfelt write.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wow .. if he sends you right out of your mind .. maybe you need to reconsider Loving him .. .. Unless the bad outweighs the very good .. I like the bold print, I think it fits the mood .. ..

I never could resist tears .. Jasmine

[Leigh]

This is delivered at some pace and with great venom, you tell him, enough is enough. I can really feel her anger and his complacency.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is beautiful and I love the way it flows together!

[Honey54]

"Our tunes played out, we ruined the song" Hot line...I love the flow! nicely written...one of a favs for me....

[patricia]

nicely penned, you told a story in one poem. enjoyed.