The nights mood

 

 

 

The night wind wisps

over our naked bodies,

as we indulge in the delight

of each others sexual appetite.

The weeping willow shutters

out a beautiful melody as the

leaves sway softly in the nights mood.

Sheltering us from peeping eyes.

We lose ourselves in total ecstacy.

Reviews

[brigid]

lové..the night wind wisps....very beautifully evocative poem...its so easy to be there..losing yourself......thank you

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

a very beautiful mixture of experience and inspiration.

[WILDERNESS]

thats plain bold and beautiful

[Stammers]

The weeping willow shutters

out a beautiful melody


thats a nice line.

Wonderfully phrased I like this very much. Unique and so one with nature.

[emmajoy]

That is drama and lust personified! Love the idea of the willow shuttering your ecstasy .. a private passionate time alive within a natural space .. my goodness, yes!

[J. J. Nightingale]

Whew .. and Wow .. I was looking at the pic to see what I could see .. lol

Hawt .. Jazzy

[R J Askew]

Really like 'the weeping willow shutters'. Very evocative.

[Distant horizons]

Nicely done. Although, it may be just me, but you wouldn't catch me anywhere near there at night. It would scareify me too much :-)