Free

Playing in fields of corn.
Building memory’s of gold.
Free spirits all around and
futures not yet told. Dancing
through the fields, free as a eagle
in the sky. Not a problem in the world
from children playing in fields of gold.

Reviews

[Ursula Kay Vos]

I like the word play here. A minor edit note, "memory's" should be memories. Not really a big thing at all :) Again you are showing us your unique style as a poet and have in a few short lines given a nice story in the form of a single stanza poem :)
Well done.
It was very fluid to read and came across with a nice harmony.
The idea of the golden memories, is a great one as you have laid it out as a childhood memory. You captured the essence of a carefree childhood experience and penned it articulately.
Well done again.
UKV

[WILDERNESS]

v nice.........care to read my "Gold"

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful

[Leslie Philibert]

What I find interesting in this poem is that it is written like a paragraph in a text,it has therefore an unusual style,that produces the feeling of a kind of lyrical footnote.
Good work.

[Matt "Mickey" Denney]

This makes for a very cool visual. Living here in Nebraska, it was easy for me to relate. Good writing!

[Kim's Poems]

I really enjoyed this piece, very nicely written