Dear Santa Claus

Dear Santa Claus

A Story by Rose of Gondor
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A 7-year-old's letter to Santa Claus

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Dear Santa Claus,
                                  I don't want a teddy bear or a book or a doll this year. I want Mommy and Daddy to stop yelling at each other. Mommy says they're just talking about things, but I think she's lying. Mommy hates Daddy. Every night they wake me up with their screaming. It's all my fault. It started the time I asked Mommy if we could move back to North Carolina, where there was snow. Then Mommy started yelling at Daddy. You don't have to give me a present this year, since I've been a bad, bad little girl, but I promise I'll be good all year long if things could go back to normal this Christmas. I just want my Mommy and Daddy together again. I just want them to love each other and to love me.

                        Merry Christmas,
             Abby


© 2012 Rose of Gondor


Author's Note

Rose of Gondor
With a great many thanks to my beta Rachi (sorry I haven't consulted with you in such a long time!!!!!!!), who made the whole polishing process a lot smoother. :)

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Poor kid. Nicely penned write with a touching feel to it.

Ghost

Posted 12 Years Ago


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that's so not kool-aid! :( poor girl thinks its her fault and is writing to santa...aww poor girl :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww...it's so sweet, sincere and sad. I love it. Abby thinking it's her fault and that she's been a bad girl seems really like what a seven-year-old in this situation would think. It's amazing! Great little write.

~Jasmine Thousand~

Posted 12 Years Ago



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