Hope

Thou art the candle When all lights Go out

Flame in the night

Thy light doth shine

Sung with thy dream divine

Thy soothing lullaby

 

For thou art the fire

Thy triumph sweet

When all lights go out

Thy flame doth keep

 

Thy immortal blaze

Lighter of our days

Forever in bloom

Thy field of dreams

Author's Note

It actually rhymes. It ACTUALLY rhymes!!! Hahahahahaha!!! Anyway, wrote this for an assignment. :)

Reviews

[jennifer little]

great job

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

I think "hope" is one of the most beautiful words in the English language, along with "requiem" and "ailurophile".

[Alex Vidmar]

What I really enjoyed most about this was how it was written in an "old english" style of speaking. Very beautiful in wording.

[Allen Smuckler]

Forget the rhyming, DR
The style and rhythm and old world feel...that's what I loved about this well thought out beauty.
Absolutely a terrific write....well worth saving in my Library
allen

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:D *twinkly eyes* ah! this was beautiful how you used fire for hope oh yeah i must have alot of hope with all the times i've been burned by fire :P

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful! Packed with creative images of the light of hope and poetic artistry. Excellent work.