Made of Porcelain

There are some days
When I felt like I had
Lost myself
There are some ways
For me to recover
But you don't give me the chance
With you it's all the same
You treat me like your toy
You don't care about my
Feelings and my pain
Maybe it is better to be
Made of porcelain
At least a doll can't feel
Unwanted and alone
At least a doll can't feel
Invisible and empty
LIke I do
So maybe it's better to be
Made of porcelain

Author's Note

Written to a friend who aroused these feelings. It's not meant to insult her or anything, it's just that sometimes I'm very, very mad at her and frankly, I would hope she can see why.

Reviews

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Very lovely yet strong! It would be nice to be made of porcelain sometimes I admit!

[Rose of Gondor]

Thank you for the lovely review!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Welcome! :)

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awwwwww :o this was so potent of feelngs that you feel sad for who ever goes trough this gah its such a sad feeling :( yet described and written so beautifully :)

[Eric Cox]

Theme is penned very nicely. Good work!

[THE Super Hero]

I love it! Beautiful! Its very easy to relate to and I find this poem very enjoyable. You use of simply language is actually effective. Using such simply words to describe a complicated and horrible feeling.
WONDERFUL

[Lizzy]

I like it. It tells people that you are a human not a pincushion. Dolls don't need love a woman does. All deserve it.