Who I Am

Who I Am

A Poem by Rose of Gondor

You call me everyday
To ask me if I'm okay
And of course I always
Lie
The truth is too true too real
And sometimes I don't know why I feel
Necessary to shrivel up and
Die

 

It's the cruelty of the world
That's killing me everyday
It's like reality unfurled
It isn't something you do or say
It's me
It's me


I tried to be what you want
I tried to be your puppet
Even when I knew it's
Wrong
Maybe you don't understand
Maybe you don't want to try
Maybe you don't know who I
Am

 


 

© 2011 Rose of Gondor


Author's Note

Rose of Gondor
Whoa...this actually...rhymes....

I haven't rhymed in a long while. :) Yay!

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a great poet knows how to make you feel anything and yet you're blessed to your type of writing style to share great poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good poem. Nice expressive pen on this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


its really good as always

Posted 12 Years Ago


I feel a little is still either left unsaid or is misspoken. But I get the overall feeling. Has a good flow to it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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