Lost

Lost

A Poem by Rose of Gondor
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My own words and lies swallow me Turmoil rising in my heart I don't remember which path to take For I am left alone in the dark

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My own words and lies swallow me

Turmoil rising in my heart

I don’t remember which path to take

For I am left alone in the dark

 

Lost and wandering in the snow

Where, in the end, will my feet take me?

To pain or to healing? To joy or to sorrow?

For I do not know where my fate lies

 

Down this winding road

A dim light lingers

It calls to my unspoken hope

And yet I cannot reach it

 

For I am lost

Trapped in my own dark dreams

A prisoner of my mind

As the days fly past into shadow

 

My feet take me far

Yet to where I cannot tell

Every path looks the same

Which of ways lead out?

 

I cannot see the sun

For I am lost

Too deep within myself

Lost, without guidance

 

And though I may not admit

That I am walking in circles

In truth, I am lost

Will no one help me?

 

If I called for aid

Would you come to me?

Would you forgive all?

Would you save me?

 

Would you guide me?

Would you leave me?

Would you love me?

I do not know.

 

I am lost.

 

 

© 2012 Rose of Gondor


Author's Note

Rose of Gondor
Sometimes I feel lost, unsure which is the right way, what path to take. This is just a way to vent my feelings.

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Circumstances can change in a New York minute so never despair troubled times or take good times lightly. Excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very beautiful... I love your writing style and the ending is very effective... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rose of Gondor

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much! This is a bit out of the box for me, and not my usual style, but I tried it, and i g.. read more
Rox Bain ☮

12 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
It's beautiful...
Rose of Gondor

12 Years Ago

Thanks again! :D
This poem was nicely written. I really liked it. You perfectly describe the feeling of uncertainty one gets when feeling lost. Keep it up :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rose of Gondor

12 Years Ago

Thank you.

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