Hope Flutters

Haiku

Hope flutters away...

 

               To some corner of the sky

 

Never to be seen

 

 

Author's Note

First haiku ever...kinda sucky, I know. :D

Reviews

[The Watcher]

Short but intense, and it's definitely not sucky. Well written, and kudos.

100/100

[Rose of Gondor]

Thank you! First haiku ever, I thought it might be a little rough. Thanks for you're kind words!

[The Watcher]

You're very welcome! =)

[Michael G.]

It's a very good haiku.
Forget the "kinda sucky..."

[Rose of Gondor]

Haha, thank you.

[Lost in Wonderland]

In three simple verses, you captured so much truth and depth. Haiku's are hard to master and I don't enjoy them most of the time. But this was the exception to my assumption. Very well done :)

[Rose of Gondor]

Thanks! :D this is my first time I tried it. It isn't really all that poetic or mysterious as normal haikus are, but I tried!