the confession of a pining devotee

the confession of a pining devotee

A Poem by florence
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august tenth, 2019

"
you are always in my mind.
you never leave me.
things move slowly as i
wait for you, forever.

time is nothing when faced
by my devotion, which is
endless and eternal, even
when challenged. nothing would
sway me. only for your
favour would i quit this
infinite resolution;
i would do this
despite the depth of my
love, if you so wanted,
because of my faith in you.
nothing is questioned.

© 2019 florence


Author's Note

florence
i really like this one. if the structure looks random, thats because it is; does it take away from or add to the subject?
any other general thoughts are welcome.

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Added on August 19, 2019
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