The Ocean Beckons

A haiku

The ocean beckons

Silently, silently now

Listen to her song.

Author's Note

Another haiku from long ago. I wasn't near any body of water when I wrote this. ^_^;

Reviews

[Alice Oiseau]

Very beautiful! The ocean's song, something I long to hear again.
I love the 'silently, silently' because it gives the effect of the ocean singing this song for only the few who dare to listen. Almost like it's impossible to hear otherwise. It's so quiet, but when heard, so beautiful.
Wonderful haiku.
Cheers.

[Jenn Gold]

The simplicity of haikus makes this so beautiful. One simple thing: the ocean's song.
I love it. :)

[Donni]

I want to learn how to write Haiku. Simplicity is not one of my strengths. The silent call of the ocean even from miles away. Nicely done!

[deeps]

A very beautiful haiku, Wonderful write.