Electric fan

Another haiku ;P

A peaceful evening

The sound of my electric fan

Lulls me to sleep.

Author's Note

I wrote this one some time ago. I have a habit of making haiku out of everyday things. :)

Reviews

[TapestryLange]

This haiku is probably the one I enjoyed most of those of yours I've read this morning. I really appreciated the everyday nature of the piece and its simplicity. After all, that's what the form is all about! You did a remarkable job of capturing the moment. Thanks for sharing!

[Frances O'Neill]

Sometimes that is all it takes to get you nodding! Nice haiku!

[M.]

i like your haiku habit! expressing things in poems is much better than just saying, "the fan made me fall asleep." :)