Pray

Friday Aug 28 2009

Pray

I want to research but I can’t

too afraid I’ll find a rant

of guns, and dangers, and bombing crews

that I never want concerned with you

 

But strong is it hard to be

with you so far out over seas

 

So pray for you I must do

in hopes of one day seeing you

now I can only sit and wait

hoping that it’s not too late

Author's Note

I wrote this in like ten min. so it's going to need a lot of revision. Please help out by leaving a comment.

Reviews

[A]

I really like this. I really like the flow of the words and your rhyming is really good. It's short and sweet and I don't have a bad critique to give. Great poem :)