Edward's Creation(carlisle's p.o.v)

Edward's Creation(carlisle's p.o.v)

A Poem by rosaliecullen624
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carlisle's point of view of esward's creation

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Father gone, Mother soon
'Save him!' she screamed and pointed to her dying son
'The way only you can!'
For a moment I was certain she knew my secret
But then she passed on
Never peaceful, not even in death
I stole her son; Edward was his name, Edward Mason
I crossed the rooftops to my house
For I didn't know what to do
He was a honest boy even if he was on his deathbed
I would kill him or save him, that was all I knew
Sweat on his head, dark rings around his eyes
He would be with his parents soon
I went for his neck and almost couldn't stop
I pulled away, saw him writher in pain
He screamed for me to kill him
And I so badly wanted to
For seeing him in pain was killing me too

© 2009 rosaliecullen624


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^^ I think this was the best out of all of them,
Even though you've written like thousands, lmfao.
Describes the situation PERFECTLY :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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im tall and i have green eyes and lomg red hair. i have 3 piercngs- eyebrow, nose and stomach and i have 7 tattoos- 4 on my ankles, 2 on mywrists and 1 on my stomach. i like vampires and witchcraft.. more..

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