afraid of letting go

song lyric********

                                  though the fear     

                                  keeps me away

                                  I keep hiding

                                  these days away

                                  like a tangled war

                                  my heart is meek

                                  words rumble inside 

                                  to weak 

                                  to speak.

                                  trust is more 

                                  than the

                                  love you show.

                                  can't look now

                                  afraid to let go

                                  though my thoughts

                                  are a spinning wheel

                                  it captures a glimps

                                  of me hugging you near

                                  

when you're afraid to let go of someone-sometimes fear can hold you back.

but when you see the other side.  The dark roads begin to shine.

                              still working on my new song~    at my(rose) music..

may it help or may it inspire someone..:)

                     

                               

                            

                                  

                            

                                 

                           

 

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

I can almost hear the melody behind this. "It captures a glimpse" out what it's like to step out and be on your own.
Someday, (if you ever record any of these), I would love to hear them !!!!

So much to read, so little time....

[maria ( rose)]

aww thank you so much!!!! :) I hope to record them one day

[D]

Well it did inspire me to write the eleventh piece of poetry today. Thank you for sharing. :)
Beautiful as it is.

[maria ( rose)]

you are way to kind..thanks again friend:)

[D]

My pleasure. :)

[maria ( rose)]

if anyone out there likes to write music and would like to collaborate please let me know..thanks.

[maria ( rose)]

I love to write songs...and play guitar