Secrets

A Poem by maria ( rose)

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~~Secrets~~

I can't run ...

I can't hide

because this secret

is blowing my MIND

I can't run..

I can't hide

this secret has me

losing my mind

It came without warning

like a twisted fate

holding me down

no where

to escape

knowing that I can't

have you

only

in my dreams

I'M STUCK !

with a feeling

no one knows

only a bleeding heart

that gently waits

a heart that holds..> no shame

for feelings

I can't explain

my hearts ramps and screams

I love you !!!

but who can hear?

only a heart

that sits in

silence.

© 2015 maria ( rose)

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iand63

I notice you use this columned layout a lot. Can I ask the reason for this? ☺

Posted 9 Years Ago

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9 Years Ago

Because I like it. It's called Acting-Out Poems.

9 Years Ago

aaah ok I have never heard of this style will research :)

9 Years Ago

yes, thanks for stopping by:)

Anindita Janhabee

Really a grossing one... Says about a heart very lonely, shy, silent, love and above all full of untold secrets. A profound poem, liked it...

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank You sweetie:)

terry smith

Beautiful!!Maria, simply beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank You terry !!! :)

Matthew-Ryan Willams

I'm not too well versed in the rules and laws of poetry but I like this. Unrequited love feels so like that.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

not breaking no laws here..lol Thank You Matt for your kind review:)

Aarea

I agree with Lizardo, your format is amazing. The last word, silence, ties everything up beautifully. Well done. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank YOuuuu!! so much !!

Lizardo

I love the format of the poem and the poem too! So much passion and beautiful words on it.
Secrets, secrets can be our worst nightmare or even our best friends. I personally don't like secrets, but either way, we all have them right? I guess that's why make us all special. The last line is my favorite, you yell for love but no one hears so your heart rest in silence? That's the most creative line I've seen in a while here, this is truly an awesome poem. I'm adding this one to my favorites, thank your sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

OH MY GOSH that is so awesome !! I am so happy and so pleased. I really appreciate you stopping by .. read more

Philip Muls

The format screams passion and inner conflict. Will you tell him or not. It crushes you. No shame for feelings you cannot explain. That captures the beauty but also the powerlessness of a crush. See my story Lovesick if you have the time.

Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank You so Much for your kind words and your time. I sure will !! I look forward to it...maria

Bare trees

According to this you have more than one heart?

It can be hard to keep a secret that wants to burst out like an explosion. I like the ending.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

awww (SMILING) what an awesome review!!!! Thank You so much for stopping by..

9 Years Ago

I enjoyed.

Johnny

hhhmm very good!! You reminded me of E.E. Cummings.. He would play with the fonts and eeverything just like you did! STUPENDOUS! I could just capture the image of a woman grabbing at her head in her room inconsolable.. I hope this is not stemming from your own personal experiences but if it is then I applaud your effective artistic expressions!