why?

that is the question......

why 

Oh' why

do I

 feel this way?..

why Oh'

 why

do I

let my 

feelings

 get in 

the way?..

I look

 to you

with a smile

(feeling blue)

while my heart

is shredding

into

 two

so I look

to the sky

as I 

ask God

why?

why

do I 

feel this 

way?

when a love 

is true

and meant 

for you

it will 

never go

away !

just some of my new lyrics to my song

that I had written on 5-16-`15

@my music

 maria

all rights reserved.

recorded time:2:00 pm

Reviews

[terry smith]

nice!! I would like to hear it :)

[Inject Positivity]

Passionate love kind of poem.....Its a good song too.....You should sing it........Thumbs up!!!!

[maria ( rose)]

haha you are too kind....I do love this song...thanks friend

[Inject Positivity]

I will be singing this one the whole day if you don't mind dear.....

[maria ( rose)]

nah I don't mind,,,,lol just sang it again to myself...have a great day where ever you may be,,right now it's sleepy time for me...zzzz lol ttyl

[Inject Positivity]

Hmmm you too.... Will be missing you.....Will be Waiting for you....

[Scarlet Victory]

Wow! This is beautiful. It describes what i have felt so many times and i just fell in love with your lyrics. Thank you for sharing. I really value your work.

[maria ( rose)]

Thank You so much:) !!!

[solo2be]

That was very well written. Great job!!!

[maria ( rose)]

Thank You solo2be

[B. Boileau]

I can almost hear it. I love this little bit of enchantment.
It's simply an amazing piece.
bill

[maria ( rose)]

thank you so much:)

[Johnny]

very good Maria!! It feels very rhythmic!! and my favorite poetic subject is love so this piece of yours fits in nicely with what I try to make relateably through my work.. I feel your music, please make more! :)

[maria ( rose)]

Thank You so much for this wonderful review Dominique:)

[Lizardo]

This is really really good. I felt like this when I was in liked a girl.
Great way to add the those feelings to the poem, I really like this.

[maria ( rose)]

thank you so much for taking the time to read & for your friendship :) That is what's so cool about poetry we can write our stories in a few lines and people can relate.

[Lizardo]

I know right? that's awesome thing about it

[maria ( rose)]

it sure is :)

[R Smith]

a lovely song Maria, i'm sure its beautiful to hear, bravo :)

[T]

This is really well done. I like the little tension you add by putting the final word lower below.

[maria ( rose)]

thank You so much Autumn, I really appreciate you stopping by and commenting haven't heard from no one in such a long time so I thought today would be a great day to start and make a book..lol
:)

[T]

I wish you luck.

[maria ( rose)]

thank you !!! You'll see me soon..I will review you as well and thanks again for the wishes :)

[T]

No reviews needed for me but thanks for the thought. (read my bio)

[Saddam]

Just an awesome piece. Love the way of expression.
I keen to have listen this song. Can you please send me the link?

[maria ( rose)]

Thank You soo much for your interest ,When I have a link available I will be more than happy to share it :)