Crossroads

     you ...

 

Keep flashing in my mind

everyday and every night

you're like a crossroad to my heart

can't keep the distance apart

you're like a swift train

rolling by,,,

flames shooting from the sky

signals flashing

and whistles

 

blaring your  name ..  ;)

 

 

By Maria Rose♥

 

 

 

Copyright © 2014 maria rose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Love makes calling someone name very sweet indeed.

[Emerald]

This is not only a great poem, but would make very meaningful song lyrics as well.

[maria ( rose)]

funny you should say that,,I came on to finish it:))) thank you so much Emerald:)

[RAOrourke]

I enjoyed your poem and the vivid images it presented

[maria ( rose)]

omg I'm so sorry ,,I missed your comment here..Thank You so much for reviewing:)

[FJ]

You really know how to put your message out there and with your formatting you hit people between the eyes. Another top notch poem!!!

[maria ( rose)]

omg FJ, I just read all your reviews on my poems how awesome are you! I can't thank you enough.

[FJ]

Don't think of me as awesome - you are the one that is. You have great insight, talent and ability. Your poems show an artistic flare without going over board.

[Jack Kennedy]

So cool I like that you have Your OWN style. OWN IT!!! :) I Lobe it!

[maria ( rose)]

hhaaa thanks Jack and for your warm friendship:)

[Jack Kennedy]

Always! keep making these HITS!!! I'll be around...

[maria ( rose)]

I sure will ! ..see ya again soon:) goodnight

[Stephen]

Amazing!
Once again, am glad to be on your pages. I loved this beautiful poem, I think, your passion about poem or love's damn gratifying which's good by me. Ha! I adored this marvelous poem. You've been the best as before.

[maria ( rose)]

AHHH Stephen that review just touched my heart♥
can't thank you enough:)
So happy we became friends and I feel the same way about your writing♥

[Stephen]

Maria, you know it..you know that I always love touching the heart of angels. Ha! Glad to touch your red heart, whooo...whoo, your heart's so warm! Ha! It's very useful in winter keeping the demons warm. Ha! (Kidding)

Thanks for the kind words, am glad you loved my stuffs too.
Thank you, Maria :)

[maria ( rose)]

Ha haaa you made my day ♥♥:))))))

[Stephen]

Thanks, I always love making angels's days, moreover..I love making their nights too. Ha! (Kkidding)

[maria ( rose)]

♥ hahaa too funny!!!!! ;)

[David Scott]

Fabulous use of a metaphor Maria. You have me new insight to how a relationship can be seen in our lives.
I like how you took an overused metaphor and freshened it up so it felt completely new to my mind.
A truly special poem.

[maria ( rose)]

ahh♥ thank you David. Your review made me smile

[Emily]

The words just go so nice together! Good Job!

[maria ( rose)]

thank you :))) Emily!!

[wordman]

I hear the train a coming it`s rolling around the bend oh hell! I`m in love again
I loved your poem got carried away on the comment lol

[maria ( rose)]

hahaaaa,,hey I don't mind at all so glad you fell in love with it :))) hope all is well with you