Somewhere over the rainbow

Somewhere over the rainbow

✿¸.•°*”˜˜”*°•.✿

I found you
You lit my sky

with flaming colors

and dreams that I wish

would come true.

 
Do you believe
in binding hearts
that only bleed
for one another?

You shed light  

between the clouds

that were gray
and brought

joy and laughter

when I was lost
in another.

Without you..

I wouldn't know what to do

I can only dream of another day

being with you.

For all we have are words to live by
spoken behind closed doors

and all I say

is  why oh' why?

When you are more

than just

that ordinary guy.

 

Reviews

[A. Amos]

When you are more
than just
that ordinary guy.

Your creativity shines in this well written poem. Your above verses are very effective. Every man wish to hear such words:) Great writing my friend.

[maria ( rose)]

ahh wow ! Thank YOU so much Amos!! It is a pleasure to see you my friend♥thank you for supporting me and my writing,,I really appreciate it.

[A. Amos]

You're always welcome my dear and I love the song, still so fresh and alive...just take us in different world...you have taste in music and ths piece who ever you wrote for give him my message, he should love and respect you all his life:)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Sounds like a very special person:)))))))))))))))) Awesome write:)

[maria ( rose)]

Hello,,always good to see you ! thank you for your visit and support :))

[0000000000000000000000000000]

:))))))))))) welcome always good to see u2:))

[Stephen]

I love the ending the way your starting I love. Nice one n the title, "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" expressing the feelings of your heart nicely! Nice poem!

Keep it up!

[maria ( rose)]

ahh Thank you so much for your kind review. I really appreciate it..maria

[Saddam]

Without you..
I wouldn't know what to do
I can only dream of another day
being with you.

Love this one... It is awesome... Beautifull write.

[maria ( rose)]

aww thank you so much for your kind words

[Saddam]

you're welcome dear.