~My Butterfly

 

 

♥ .............................My Butterfly..............................♥

                                      You fly free

                                  through my vessels

                                      inside of me

                               like a tranquil of desire

                              circulating my entire soul

                         wrapping your wings around me

                                       I feel love

     

            

 

                                        

                                  
                               

                                  

 

                

 

                     

  

Reviews

[Stephen]

Now this poem really makes me chuckle ------ I love how you collect all of your heart`s warmth over the palm of your beautiful soft hand letting it blow to the hearts of people is what I just loved and enjoyed reading... beautiful poem once again which comes from your heart, Sweety. Lovely!

[NoelHC]

I really like what you manage to convey in just a few words. I love butterflies. This is light and floats just like one.
I just added a short piece in my writing, Mariposa, a little story about a butterfly display I visited recently. Please have a look at it when you can.

[maria ( rose)]

ahh thank you and I certainly will !! I look forward to it.

[Justin]

that is awesome!!!!, the way u set it up was pretty amazing too

[maria ( rose)]

thank You so much Justin, I appreciate that nice review :)

[Justin]

your welcome, it deserves alot!! amazing writer!!

[maria ( rose)]

:)) thank you, and I think the same of you.

[Justin]

:) your welcome, thanks, we have something in common :)

[maria ( rose)]

and that my friend is always a plus :))) take care chat with you soon!!!

[Justin]

coool, cant wait to talk to you again :) :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Nicely done the butterfly effect:)))))))))))))))

[maria ( rose)]

thank you !! I'm earning points with you today..lol
she is right,,you are awesome!!! :))

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Milesssssssssssssss of smilessssssssssssssssssssssssss

[maria ( rose)]

your way to cool !

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Well ty:)))))))))))))) so are you

[wordman]

I love the whole concept of this poem maria great job
ron

[maria ( rose)]

thank you so much!

[Jack...]

This was a beautiful little poem Maria. This one really touched me today. Nicely penned.

[maria ( rose)]

Aww awesome! thank you so much Jack♥