Chapter 2 ~ Location~

Here in this chapter Jade sais what she does after sachool with a question at the end.

No I don’t sell drugs! I just go to a program its like a camp but its not but after that. Me and my friends go tagging around town. For you’se dumb jerks that don’t know what tagging is it is when a group or solo person or people go around town,city,place ect. Spray painting garages, walls or anything that the person wants. Then puts his or her name saying something like: Property of _______. But I never out my name I put JD for Jade Duran or Juvenile Delinquent. My sisters don’t know anything about that neither does my mom. They are the most clueless human beings in the world.

There in the program we have 3 groups 1^st and 2^nd graders, 3^rd and 4^th graders, then the 5^th

and 6^th graders. I’m in the 6^th grade one because, I just got out of 6^th grade. There I know

2 people from when I first got there. Miranda and Kelly I knew them from 6^th

grade. Miranda she was in intramurals and I didn’t know who Kelly was I only heard

about her but I didn’t know her that much. Miranda she would be famous for her juke

parties, that I never would go to.

I get home at noon. Then I just clean and watch TV. Like I said before I don’t go nowhere

it’s kind of a prison here at my house. I listen to music and I dance too. Since I can’t be

really active. I could go to the backyard but it’s only rocks. No grass. Only on the edge of

the fence actually but there my mom plants tomatoes and her cucumbers. I read most of

the time. I have two pen pals one in China and one in Japan so I write to then. I also have

a friends that lives in Nevada and one in New York I don’t really send letters to them but

I do. I write stories too but I get bored doing all those stuff so I don’t really do a lot of

Stuff. Oh by the way I have a huge secret from my mom that she will never suspect but

now it’s gone but ,what was it? Oh I remember.

Author's Note

Here's my secoind chapter please i need feedback.

Reviews

[Jessie]

yea, it does draw the readers in. it was better then the 1st chapter but i like them both

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

hmmmm...seems like she has a whole head full of secrets!!!! that's the reason i keep reading cause i want to know more! again, this draws the reader in, plus it has a great ending!

~may

( it just doesn't sound like little kids would do stuff like that..hehh..)

[Evil_Angel]

Hmm i like the question at the end. I love the line about Jade Duran or juvenile delinquent, thats awesome lol. Maybe we should know more about why she's a juvenile delinquent? are miranda and kelly her friends? I like this, just needs a little more building up of the characters, good job again. :)