Unbalanced Elements

UNBALANCED ELEMENTS

Fellow-Human......

Its good to hear you speak your heart out!!
Be what you want to be....be what you are meant to be...be what you are!
Do you know....we all are made out of 4 elements....AIR...FIRE...WATER...and...EARTH.
Some of us have a little more of this and a little more of that...
but on the whole...the total volume is equal for all.

Those who have EARTH in excess...enjoy life to the fullest...
they ravish on the bounty of nature and are dreaded to hear of Death.....

These are called the `Sons of the Earth`.They are sensational. They have to see to believe. These kind of people are also having an attraction towards Fire.

Some have more WATER...in their constitution....these are the dreamers.....

they retract in their Shell of dreams..in times of adversity...blissfully ignoring reality...but these people have more "feel", charm and an insight...

Some have more AIR.... and literally so...these type people
strut around the globe with the grace of a peacock and the authority
of a Royal Lion....they have dreams too...and unlike their watery counterparts,

they strive to make theior airy dreams come true...but are rarely in touch with their innermost feelings and that of others too...
and they start believing that they are the hand that controls the chisel...

the carvers of their own destiny...but they are also the thinking type...

and Lastly..the FIRE..types...the Fiery ones....the ones with their intuition at its peak...they will not be bound to any man-made religion or order...
these people are born with zeal enthusiasm and determination
with a generous dose of jealously, anger, hatred and destructive
intentions......these are the ones who create small ripples in the pool of tranquility...

leading on to a Tsunami of fire which laps everthing and everyone in its stride....

.it does not rest till it reaches the bank...the bank of destruction,

devoid of noble intention...
The AFTERMATH......A zillion n one dead hopes dashed to pieces against the rocks....

dead long before the cliffs could cut them to shreds....burnt long ago in that fiery inferno....

dead past the magik cure of the country witches soothing salve...

stolen from the fire elves themselves....

Fellow-Human.....

this whole universe of ours is a dream a long-short dream...
long enough to bear grudges against our own kind...
short enough to pass by with the blink of an eye....
We all need to balance our ELEMENTS.....none more; none the less.
Its this perfect balance that makes this dream go on.....

the dream called life.... ELEMENTS in perfect Harmony...
couples in blissful matrimony.....no more heartache ; no agony....
no gold vaults..no stashed money....
no cursing stinging bees ...we steal their Honey....
the only logical solution...for them, you and for me!

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Alskar

Your imagery is very good here. I love the line with the 'authority of a royal lion'. It's quite interesting that you use the basic natural elements to convey the message that we should accept each other and live our lives to the fullest. At least, this is what I got from it. It says, perhaps, that we should strip ourselves down to our basics and take away all the rubbish society has piled on us. Well done. My negative is the structure and grammar. I know poetry doesn't necessarily require grammar, but double exclamation marks are never acceptable. The structure also is a bit frayed - it does nothing to highlight your message, it just seems very random. Overall, though, good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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12 Years Ago

Hi MoonA....i will listen to you and try to restructure my work....thank you for your lovely inputs:.. read more

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Chris

We learn by listening...

thx sir...its just a reflection i reflect

Zeitgeist Manifesto

Great Philosophical work!
A "How to" on life....
We need all the help we can get.

a how-to...lol how nice a genre...thanks Zeit i shall remember you

Becky C Strukamp

I loved this. Thank you for sharing it. I find it amazing and so interesting. Nothing preachy here my friend. You have tuned into the atmosphere around us, what we are, who we are, the cause and effects, its brilliant. You are tuned into the universerse. When all is in alignment, that is when things fall into place for us. This was an amazing write. Going to put it my favorites for sure.

This was targetting at the eve of Dec 23 2013 Becky and I am glad it has come to pass without much d.. read more

You are welcome! :)

Desert Dreamer

Balance is the secret...I like your words of warning for those that let one element take control...I see a bit of each element in myself, maybe a little less of the fire than the other three, but even so I hear the voice of the fire calling for destruction. Much to ponder here in your words.