Maybe its love again

This is for couples who have gone their separate ways and one day I hope and pray..will be united together again..in this World or the next. When quarrels are resolved and flame of love kindred again

Feeble pulses, electric impulses in my brain,

Subtle excitement, rapid advancement, like a train,

Coolness and dampness, droplets of laughter in the rain,

Heart-beats are racing, love-birds are kissing;

 Maybe its love again!

Church Bells are pealing, the pilgrims are kneeling;

Praying hard...

You are a minstrel roaming the valley;

I'm a Bard.

The sounds of the Organ, the bulbs filled with Argon;

 they delight me.

Your flowery attire and taste for sattire fills me with

 glee...

Run down the mountain, right to the fountain of life,

Roll in the green-grass free from the brown dust called

and strife,

Wave out to the sheppard, GROWL at the leopard; stay alive!!

Ring on your finger,will you in November, be my wife??

Wonder what went wrong was it a sad song I sang?

Tears in your eyes flowed, crimson your cheeks glowed, my

 ma`am.

Past deeds forgotten, anew bell in autumn you rang!!

Hope that this trust grows, hope that your heart knows,

...............Maybe its love again!

SOLAR PLEXUS CHAKRA live video of this song 

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video at http://youtu.be/vuS7bMEMPc8

Author's Note

Please do not misunderstand me...I know there is a lot more behind the scenes in a separated couples life that I dont take into consideration.

But just for the sake of those few cherished moments spent together...moments that seemed to last forever....can this spark come again back to life.

Readers may beg to differ and I am open to criticism on the subject hoping that I may have a learning glance from the other side of the story.

But more than anything....treat it like the song and poem that is...if not so much for the content....then for its melody.
Be happy.


(and if you are below sixteen....please close your eyes and dont look at that picture...its just an angel anyway...and not mine)

Reviews

[guiltyascharged]

Oh I might cry. This is a very beautiful poem the flow was perfect and the rhyme was heavenly. Very beautiful and inspired me!

[brenda]

this is beautiful ! the music is fascinating !:) i love the poem!/ lyrics lol im fifiteen i barely nticed the angel :p but love this!:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

I thought it was beautifully mastered. You created great imagery. Made my heart go pitter patter.A lovely write.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I did it for U beck:0

[Becky C Strukamp]

What a sweetheart! I shall treasure the thought for eternity! :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I felt two halves of one heart and all of the dynamics that shape their beings.
This is a real gem.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I bless you Zeit.