Maybe its love again

This is for couples who have gone their separate ways and one day I hope and pray..will be united together again..in this World or the next. When quarrels are resolved and flame of love kindred again

Feeble pulses, electric impulses in my brain,

Subtle excitement, rapid advancement, like a train,

Coolness and dampness, droplets of laughter in the rain,

Heart-beats are racing, love-birds are kissing;

 Maybe its love again!

Church Bells are pealing, the pilgrims are kneeling;

Praying hard...

You are a minstrel roaming the valley;

I'm a Bard.

The sounds of the Organ, the bulbs filled with Argon;

 they delight me.

Your flowery attire and taste for sattire fills me with

 glee...

Run down the mountain, right to the fountain of life,

Roll in the green-grass free from the brown dust called

and strife,

Wave out to the sheppard, GROWL at the leopard; stay alive!!

Ring on your finger,will you in November, be my wife??

Wonder what went wrong was it a sad song I sang?

Tears in your eyes flowed, crimson your cheeks glowed, my

 ma`am.

Past deeds forgotten, anew bell in autumn you rang!!

Hope that this trust grows, hope that your heart knows,

...............Maybe its love again!

SOLAR PLEXUS CHAKRA live video of this song 

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video at http://youtu.be/vuS7bMEMPc8

Author's Note

Please do not misunderstand me...I know there is a lot more behind the scenes in a separated couples life that I dont take into consideration.

But just for the sake of those few cherished moments spent together...moments that seemed to last forever....can this spark come again back to life.

Readers may beg to differ and I am open to criticism on the subject hoping that I may have a learning glance from the other side of the story.

But more than anything....treat it like the song and poem that is...if not so much for the content....then for its melody.
Be happy.


(and if you are below sixteen....please close your eyes and dont look at that picture...its just an angel anyway...and not mine)

Reviews

[Michael G.]

Excellent flow and rhythm.
Loving thoughts of love, and love missed. Very good thoughts here. Can they make it back? That's for them, and the strength of their love to determine.
Well done. Keep writing.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I hope its ok for you both by now.

[Roger Ferguson II]

i love the rhyme, very romantic, great song. thought sometimes love will have to give way to life and reason, and its always sad. but this is a wonderful piece

[Bailey C. Writing]

Beautiful...romantic...I had a dreamy sigh while reading this...haha, you did fantastic with this

[SM Davis]

I have officially become your newest fan. I am sending this on to some friends.

[Chris]

When couples break into 'singles' sometimes both sides aren't in agreement as to the wanting to be 'singles'. But it really isn't very often that a full melt-down break-up ever returns to where they were.

Chris

[Marie Harrison]

Very romantic, your poem and music.
I enjoyed both.
I was wondering the same thing
What goes wrong to make
long standing couples
go their separate ways?
Maybe their love just dies.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautiful. I especially liked the video. Great write!

[Daytonight]

Beautifully poignant in parts. Just plain beautiful in others. So true to life. Well done.

[Tkess]

I am not one who believes in "the one" but every so often you met someone who no matter how the relationship ended, good or bad, there continues to be that fleeting glimpse. That "spark" that reignites again and again. Excellent write.