Their faith in me dwindles when I go bro..

Their faith in me dwindles ...when I go broke....

Joining the Cruise-liner?!... Now that'd be a master-stroke....

Earning just to spend .....and learning how to be hungry again....

You scratch my back; I scratch yours....lousy trade-off...and what a clumsy joke!!

I work and earn ...you cook and moan ...

when there is no food... I settle for Onion soup......

I fill those young minds with music...you hammer my head and make me weak...

I try my best to comfort you...and you say I'm up to tricks...

The kids have taken after you.....Respect .......to them is a term brand-new.....

I hope that soon they mend their ways...and you mend yours too I pray....

And hope that this silly monkey business is definitely not here to stay!

Walk in my vegetarian- Moccasins ...for just one bloody tiring day....

Detach your self from the Television...it drives your good-sense away....

And for the sake of this Hollow-Earth...stop being a kid and stop bullying Children,

I am done with advising you....wonder if you will ever learn!!

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Pradnya

hey actually me...., no need to learn, you known i am all that good :); jokes apart, poem is just amazing, it is just showing the reality of today, perfectely potrayed with the help of rhyming words ,thank you for sharing

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icelandicblue

Walk in my vegetarian- Moccasins ...for just one bloody tiring day....

You have such a way with words. Thanks for the smile.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

smile on my good womane...
smiling is a trait so very humane

Beautifully Tragic xPoe..

Great message in these lines! Perfect.

Desert Dreamer

"Much truth in the line
"Earning just to spend .....and learning how to be hungry again...."
How many of us spend most of our lives working only to spend the money on things we don't need, and always we are hungry, working for money takes the meaning out of life. That TV doesn't do any good for the soul either... Great writing!

TheElfPrincess

Made me smile a lot. A very good piece of writing. I liked it. Well done.

Bailey C. Writing

I like this...it's interesting and it had me smiling. The rhyme scheme was good, and I have nothing bad to say about this :) It had a nice rhythm to it

Maimai

interesting poem :)

LadyKarissa

Very interestin poem. It has a lot of truth to it.
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VelvetRosetta

Lol...awww some ppl can be this way, I for one wish someone would walk in my shoes for a day! And wish I could sit in front of the television too! Oh well, nice read, thanks for sharing.

HappyTaylor

This is really interesting, and very good. Nice work! :)

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Their faith in me dwindles when I go broke

My story is yours too.....dont deny it! :)