You might have been my dudette

You might have been my dudette

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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Dreams are all we have got and fanciful desires manifest aplenty, You got your own world, and I got mine sugar, so much for sentimenty, If Jude would take a hike on Mars now, we'd be so romantic!

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You might have  been my Dudette!!


You might`ve been my Dudette!!

If I was a lil' younger...and a lil, full of anger,
I might have been kinda rude...to your ex-boyfriend Jude.

I might have been your date, if Jude brought the flowers late,
And You would have been my Dudette and I might have been your Dude!!

You might have tried to fling your shoe at me in frustration,
I might have caught it in mid-air,worn it round my neck-tie....
Called it high-street fashion!

You might have watched a spicy-dicey movie,
With me crunching vanilla  pop-corn, at the open air big drive-in .....
From dusk to early dawn!

Jude might have fumed and fretted... but he never could do Judo,
It helps to learn your martial-arts my babe,
Please forgive this poetry-kiddo!
 
P.S Who said its a cardinal sin to admire another Judes'  woman?
Lady Ga-ga goes ga-ga over Judas and Im but just another human.

© 2011 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
LOL
I dunno whata say!!
you tell me.

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This was great! Well done!
You definitely have a way with words!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful...so full of understanding of others, and so much fun to read. You sure know how to play with words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem, perfect ending. Love your stuff, man! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


loved the pictures. you are very clever. You have made something very difficult look easy and simple. I thought it was a talented write. Thanks

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sweet and playful. I enjoyed the read. Loved the ending.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so sweet.
I love the innocence in this piece.
simple yet it is soo beautiful at the same time.
Thank you for sharing
keep the ink flowing
fire

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think this is adorable :) You have a loving heart that shines! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol! This is so cute! I loved it! So very playful. ^^ Well done. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so very cute! Such a child-like feel to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked it! It gave me that child-like euphoric feeling of a first crush or something lol

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 15, 2011
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