Nothing lasts forever

Nothing lasts forever

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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I give you hope....I hope you smile again.

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Nothing lasts forever....not even separation...
Love yields to the cry of the ailing heart...
Fate forsakes its cruel path of keeping lovers apart...
And just like the passing shadows your fear too departs...
For long have you waited ...and life must go on...
There has to be a tomorrow after yesterday has gone...
Clear all your doubts and this is for certain...
He/she is missing you real bad and is bound to return!!

© 2011 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


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poetry-kiddo alienbaba
aint I right?
I I aint...please say so...
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Life must always go on, there is always tomorrow to look forward to when we are missing our loved ones.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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The first line of this poem is a bombshell- so true. I can remember being younger and wanting to hold on to the agony of a broken relationship but it always fades with time and someone comes to fill that void.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very true. i agree. very beautiful write [: i enjoyed it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so true.
what an honest and raw write.
I absolutely love it.
it makes the reader really think yet it is so beautiful in it's wordage and flow.
Thank you for sharing
keep the ink flowing
Fire

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a great thought-provoking poem, it got me thinking quite deeply! Love it - it can be interpretted in many ways - all good. Annie :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


There has to be a tomorrow after yesterday has gone...

I love this thought....sometimes it doesn't feel like it..good reminder to let go.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I re read this and YES ,you are right on!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes some people aren't bound to return....but love does return. some great lines in there.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i somehow agree with you. lol. enjoyed reading and thanks for the comment on my poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice poem!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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