Happy

Are you happy...am I...are they? What is happiness? Please do tell me...

Happy

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Your poetry has made me happy. ;-)

'Happy should be they whose thoughts are stored in the shadow of the moon's light...'

Happiness is paying it forward and expecting no rewards.

I must admit the Beatles song came to mind as soon as I started to read, Happiness is A Warm Gun...which goes in the opposite direction of your work, but that's where my head goes...'Mother Superior jump the gun'

A Superior work. Well done.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Hello Frieda I am happy for you are happy too.
Remembered mother Superior...once a year visit to our Girls Axilium convent school.
The Beatles are everywhere even in beach-beds.
Guns are just vessels for the dark angels wrath.
This one... the receiver of a reward from you.
I feel down the well...out of which this one grew:)

[Frieda P]

Poor you, convent school, good you can be happy! ha
Much enjoyed this one...my pleasure. ;-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

It was a girls school...but the nuns took us few boys in....:)

[Frieda P]

Ha, I assume that made you happy! When I went to Catholic school, Mother Superior used to swat all the boys with rulers....I was so happy to be a girl. :-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ach!
i remember the wooden ruler swats....ai...why did u rmemeber

[Frieda P]

She was a witch, I still can see her face, poor boys I always felt so sorry for them...something that stays with you...I remember thinking why is god letting her get away with this if he's so mighty, like it was yesterday.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

well...after 4th form they kicked us out...well then we were admitted to a missionary fathers school...u may say from the frying ...

[Richard Man]

I taught math and physical science in a convent school.... try being a male teacher, under 36, non-catholic for some of the sisters I was the devil incarnate.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:) ^_^

[Natasha]

very nice word usages and a great message for us all to be happy and what you personally think happiness is. the bright colors to me are a bit distracting, i prefer black, but i can see how you wanted to make it happy by using those colors.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Sorry to distract you from your world...but as you said it was in a good bright way...Thank you Natasha.

[quinfinn]

this is unique, different and a delight to ponder, and it evokes many thoughts. what makes me happy? maybe i am still trying to figure that out. love, good food and great company, i suppose. well written piece.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Good food...i forgot that Quinfinn....hot food and a hot drink on any ole winter day....or a cold lemonade on a lazy sunday summer afternoon...ahh...that too yes. Thanks!

[BL]

Music chocolate beer writing

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thats so warm too:)

[BL]

This is highly original work, very unique, you have some imagination

Happiness is swimming in the sea at night

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

dont drown

[BL]

No ill try not to

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

stay alive

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

I'm always happy.
You should be happy.
I love this poem, we all should be happy.
100/100

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Jackson im glad you are happy now:)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

Yep :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

100 it is

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

yep

[Ahmad Cox]

I love the other-worldly and almost ethereal description of love I can feel you are bring from a higher place. I really enjoyed this one.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Ahmad...thank you for the encouragement!

[Silhouette]

Wow, awesome poem, amazing job as always. My take on happiness is seeing others happy and/or making them happy :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Your take on happiness is what is needed in this world more than erer Sil:) thanku

[Silhouette]

My pleasure :)

[Nick.B]

Great poem with some deep message...great job...ummm happiness? let's see, is waking up next to someone who loves and respects you no matter what

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Nick...hapiness is waking up next to someone who loves and respects you no matter what"???? even if u turn out to be wereworlf at midnight hour? lol...thx man

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Happiness is being with the people who love you most, doin the things that you enjoy most! This was a beautiful poem and I most definitely enjoyed reading very word of it! Well done(:

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thansku for your interpretation and own views too Maggie. Glad you found your way here.

[❤ Maggie ❤]

:)

[khalid]

happiness..what a word! we hear alot about it..different definitions have been set for it..for me, i think happiness is feeling satisfied with what you have got and doing your best to get more..if you think you are not getting what you deserve, look at those who got nothing and for sure you will then be..really happy

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes this boy is smart like the one who spoke Aramaic in another time another place. Thanks Khalid

[khalid]

my pleasure

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

sure

[s y e]

Haha, this was nice! Sounds like someone is in a HAPPY mood! xP
Is that you in the picture btw?????????

Good job

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am:)
Bless ya..
its me.

[s y e]

I can tell!
Haha, peek a boo!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

haha...your 3rd eye is opened!

[s y e]

o.o

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

The eye of truth.

[s y e]

O.o I can see youuuuuu xP

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

that's the spirit of the spirit

[s y e]

Hahaha

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hohehoha