My dear lady but not mine

My greeting and salutations to all adventurous women

My dear lady and not mine...

Reviews

[Corrupthoughts]

Smooth and I like the tale it speaks of. Your style of language is rare to find these days and I like how you incorporate it. The only thing I would suggest is to break up your piece in stanzas instead of one big paragraph. it's easier to read that way and gives it the flow it deserves.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes I shall do that C....thx u

[Frieda P]

It's a unique style with a deep message within it's lovely words....all is not 'lust' but disgust on certain monny-woony days. I am mesmerized by your painting skills, a picture so profound is not easy to pen.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thansk you for your review and taking the time. The picture my lady is not by me but a download from a lucky site i happened to chance upon!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love this... Beautifully penned!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thx Robbie....its sincere:) Its for a dead stranger who keeps contacting me..

[Desert Dreamer]

Feels as if you smile as you watch the lives of others...warning them about dangers while at the same time acknowledging their happiness.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Aint that me now d,d. u know me like you do! Thanku

[Green Regol]

This has a great tone and rhythm. The rhyme doesn't sound forced, and it helps with the flow of the poem.
I like the "revere" stanza.

Beautiful. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Revere...in highest respect:)
Free ryhme and flowing yesss! thanku

[writing mojo]

flow to the human nature which spring time is your feminine measure locked on the sun light on thighs eyed line to your perception guru in shadow but never cold in your observation..good stuff

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks w.mojo ur reviews are always a joy to the eyes.

[MyInkyPen]

I love the tone of this, the rhyme scheme makes it run smoothly to great effect. I agree with 'CorruptThoughts', the style of language is interesting and a breath of fresh air, I'm a fan of the Metaphysical poets so the style of language appeals to me. Great work

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am Metaphyical personified:)
Thanks for your lovely answer!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

What I feel...........the poet watches one he adores from afar and smiles at he knows what the future holds for her contains sun and smiles. His thoughts wonder as her writes to those who have already passed. Your style use in this poem is very original and refreshing. I enjoyed this

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks so Much the poet knows what the future holds for everyone. as the future is in the past...

[MS. BABy]

This is very interesting...I liked the pattern and the thought process....

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank Babe ...you are kind too

[Lydia Blackwell]

i like the different style. I like the subject matter and how you weave other things into the poem like little gems.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Little Gems :0 they are thank you Lydia. pls visit again