Upside down

Kindled by the sound, story and visuals of the movie UPSIDE-DOWN

                                                           

Her silence hurts like a Sillion knives thrust in one’s flesh in the wake of consciousness

She visits when she feels like …like in a vision on a mission from distant satellite, Mars’ Phobos

And though Diemos denizens may lose their hope their very last bit of inverse-matter

I will not let this reverseness shatter the myth that we built once strong all around us.

                     

Two ends of a magnet but separated on reversed World, darlin’ you and damned here I

Two hands that enfold the distance between us and within this alien indigo Sky

Three words are only the ones that I could really tap in Morse code to you there up high

I come from down below and you come from up above, it’s an upside-down sweet goodbye!

                                                                                                  

 

Treetops are kissing on high-mountains opposing your land and mine

When we ascend to the summit and foreign hearts commit to unify

Then howls of the death-hounds and tragedy binds us in isolation

And nothing else matters while falling in dark waters of the Astral as memories die!

 

                                                        

                          

Then when tears have been shed and dues have been paid in warm embraces

And inverse-matter burns when non-refrigerated into the flesh of my chest

And there is no time to make funny faces when untying quickly these shoe-laces

But love’s all we've got when this dream gets too hot as we share this bed of roses!                                 

                      

   WATCH ME RECITE THIS POEM IN THIS  VIDEO AT

http://youtu.be/3LxzYhyoj_Q

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Author's Note

i DONT know whats gettin into me writin like this these days

Reviews

[Michelle Coleman]

I don't know what's gotten into you, writing stuff like this, either. But whatever it is, I hope it keeps coming back.

What a great piece! Having seen this movie, I can more easily identify the feeling expressed here.

Such a wizard with words...

"Her silence hurts like a Sillion knives thrust into one's flesh in the wake of consciousness." Damn. Those of us who have been there know just how painful that can be. Great way to begin your poem.

"Treetops are kissing on high-mountains opposing your land and mine."

"Then howls of the death-hounds and tragedy binds us in isolation and nothing else matters while falling in dark waters of the Astral as memories die!"

Love your style.

[Bluefire]

The imagery and story are excellent in this piece. It tells of a dream world filled with fantastical things and love.
Well done!

[Muse]

Okay then...now I want to see the movie. No trailer needed. If it's good enough to inspire you...it must be good enough to go see.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I got ya:) open air movie thetre in hawai

[Bowers]

well dear friend
long time not talk
ive missed your interesting ways
and yet heres a poem
you wrote from the heart
from your normal genre it strays
i love it, its sweet, a bed of roses
and you'll meet and you'll unify
and if such love is true, she'll stay with you
and there'll be no more goodbyes


okay so in other words, i really enjoyed this even if it wasnt liek your normal poems, it was a great write, very emotional, sweet and i thought it was beautiful, great job!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

dear in the dark...
u got me floored
i wrote diff. yeah.
i had to let it lay bare.
thank you my one

[Bowers]

you are so welcome
thank you for sharing
your talents and thoughts
with us to experience as well

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:) yeah thats the spirit thats mine

[Rosalind Gale]

All sparks burning here; I enjoy mushy peas, some love, too. Put your space-face next to mine. Thank you for this little trip to ether-land.
-xx-

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

you needed this as much as i did:)
thank you for making me stir the pea soup.
i am a chef now-stirring emotions.
lol thanks Rosa for these words of affection.

[smilempsn]

Looks likes someone is getting musshy musshy these days.. ;)

This is a unique love story... Waiting for her to come to a world where you belong..
And writing for her , so that she will read it someday...
And will come running to you (like in films ;))

Whole of the piece just keeps you binded up.. to read till the end word..
I just loved 2nd para...
"Two ends of a magnet but separated on reversed World, darlin’ you and damned here I
Two hands that enfold the distance between us and within this alien indigo Sky"

Those lines just show the power of love... It doesn't depend how far is the person you love..
You still love..
I liked it 'poetry-kiddo alienbaba' (Let me call you by a short name.. PKA , if it suits you :) )

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hello smilempsn yeh...musshysness is the order of the day these a days i guess..lol
yes you are right wherethe plot is concerned..
u can call me pka as it suits me as u say:)
thank you so much

[smilempsn]

:)

[NA]

Very beautiful...really enjoyed :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hello Raven Rees you too thank you

[Corset]

I think this is one of your best yet, it's tender and sad but yet earnest and ethereal, I loved it.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I think so too....it is born out of yearning and.... after learning that there really was no meaning to the exercise...the writer feels silly. But where sincerity is concerned...yes maybe it is in a way ethereal. Thank you friend Corset...this gratitude is with respect and good wishes.

[Corset]

Thank you for that. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

As always. Welcome.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

r u there?

[Corset]

maybe, sometimes, tho often in question

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

that was a question

[Corset]

..............exactly

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

do you want an answer? a a host of em?

[Corset]

why do I feel like you just asked me to take a bite of something I have no business in, if I need answers to anything someone I know and trust will provide them.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol..i was just pulln your leg..
how are you

[Corset]

like I always am :) How are you?

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

cudnt be bettr thanku