With you with me

Realization dawns on an alienated alien

With me around...

                          nothing can ever go  wrong...

even right-now!

                                        But with you around...

                     everything always seems right...

  always somehow...

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Author's Note

That is the way i feel
Do you feel what I feel
the way I do?

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Excellent feelings. Excellently written.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thank you ken man its a thought

[Becky C Strukamp]

I can relate to that! It marvelous Kiddo! Love the font and pix. It all blends well. When you think about it in the final analysis isn't that they way we all want to feel! Love love love it.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yeh Becky lol...its the rains i guess makin me write all that m,mush...well and thank you.

[smilempsn]

Aahaan.. A light and romantic one from you..

was sweet n nice read :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

surprised eh...lovebird? well..we have our moments...lol thx

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. well yesh I am surprised :P

but because you wrote it on 'Aliens' I take back my surprise :P

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

then u must watch the movie...
aliens and earthlings

[smilempsn]

Well No I am fine with Earthlings and Earthlings :P

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thats what most do:) happy earth to u

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. :)
Happy earth to u too :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

temporary though..thnak you

[smilempsn]

aaiyoo Temporary why :O

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

watch movie AFTER EARTH

[smilempsn]

hmm okies

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

watch the next one poem here

[smilempsn]

Can u name it ??

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

upside down

[smilempsn]

ohkies.. will do read it.. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx pls do and say what u hav to

[Holly Mason]

hey aliens need lovin' to*)
very nice sentiments here- like your layout..it reads nicely just like your thoughts are printed as they came out
creative-just like you
thank you for sharing my glowing friend

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i am joyful to feel your presence again

[Vria P Crow]

Woah! This poem is so hilarious and awesome at the same time!

I really love how you expressed your emotion in with universal language!

However, it is also sweet, alien love!

I can imagine that sometimes we feel from two separate worlds whether we are human, alien, ghost, or robot ;)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

you are one of those few who feel one with the one:)

[Vria P Crow]

"The Circle of Life," The Lion King

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

there is light in that statement

[Vria P Crow]

:) smilessssssssssssssssssssssssss

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thats good for you and everyone that matter

[Vria P Crow]

everyone matters to me :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thats a good way to put it

[Bluefire]

This is really good.
Short but with so much meaning in every sentence.
I love the pictures.
The whole layout of the poem is very unique.
Well done! ^^

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thank you bluefire you encourage more aliens to contact your people:)

[Bluefire]

^^ No problem.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ok

[Emily B]

beautiful

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thanks Emily

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

u and corset are die-hard friends

[Emily B]

yeah :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i would treat you to plumcakes at the cafetaria and super- icecream sodas at pop tates and a wheelbarrow full of fresh strawberries if you would tell me her phone number...
yours kindly...jughead.

[Emily B]

well, hmmmmm, girls keep secrets, it's part of the oath we take at puberty

now if she were to hint that her phone number needed to be shared, i'd be all over it

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

well the offer stands open for your number too^_^

[Emily B]

i think i have your number already ;)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

prove it by givin me a 'miss call'?

[Emily B]

. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

u did just that...and my cell went dead...
hey Emma.
i wanted to ask you something i forgot

[Emily B]

ok?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

cant remember still..................................................................

[Emily B]

when you remember it, I will be here

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i remembered...
what was the name of your dog?

[Emily B]

i don't have a dog, i have a rabbit, her name is tiger

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ha thats ok too a rabbit u said

[Emily B]

yes, we've been playing rabbit games all morning

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

forget i asked you about her number and all...
i forgot i am telepathic

[Emily B]

yeah, i already knew that

[Will Neill]

It dosent matter what planet you come from, if you are in love it crosses the stars. liked this.
Will

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

helo Wil neil...you are fine too. thank you friend

[Baby Ricochet]

AH! She's gonna party with Snake boy! You gotta play them some F' ed up lovers melody on that Sitar bro.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hi Bab:) thx you got it on the dot man....sitar twang it is:)..hey btw...this is customized and just a few are made...its a sitar with the ergonomics of a guitar..cool huh...bought it made for this one show http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZnF0eYvjJY