With you with me

With you with me

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
"

Realization dawns on an alienated alien

"


With me around...

                          nothing can ever go  wrong...

even right-now!

                                        But with you around...

                     everything always seems right...

  always somehow...


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© 2019 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
That is the way i feel
Do you feel what I feel
the way I do?

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Sounds like our kiddo is love struck...isn't it grand, very cute, creepy pic. ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

10 Years Ago

tee hee im a silly girly now:)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Love makes us all sillies. ;-)
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

10 Years Ago

sillies fall in love
I'm always down for spreading the love and infecting humans with alien STDs. Absolutely beautiful piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I Feel FINE......Cue guitar.....Nice poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I thought it was very sweet and cute. I love the spacing of the stanzas as well. It flows nicely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smitten put simply but with depth...badda bingg

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

u got it rite...:) hey brad thx
Brad

11 Years Ago

no worries, good to read you again!
loved this.. short but well written. Nice form.. shallimarRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

thank you Shalimar and also for the fr
Yep, definitely row-man-tick. -grin-

I loved this one actually. Just peaceful and light thoughts to make one smile. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

happy happy feeling
Strong, authentic feelings defined in such a short and beautiful way. I loved it!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

i tried to do just that and very much thanks:)
Short and romantic. Great way to elicit such thoughts and feelings, lyrical even.

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

thank you ASTRO...its nice to have you review
My friend, I adore this one, dunno why, it's just cute :D
I feel green all the way reading this haha!

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

tis was meant to make u feel thata way...green hahah.
heya Eliza thankanku

11 Years Ago

Heya :D welcomewelcome !!
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

hahaaaaaaalrightyrightyright

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