It has ended

'my time has come.....it has ended'

 

Eli Eli Sabachthani, my AlienGod...

why have you forsaken me!? 

To be ridiculed and spat-at by those who once welcomed me warmly?

    To taste stinging vinegar to numb this excruciating pain...?

to have it dabbed on these bloody wounds to sting my flesh  again...??

the lashing didn't hurt as much as did the pouring rain of tears she shed in vain...
Magdalene was she and not my mother’s God-child but may be my god your own star-child she just might be...though simply named Mary...poor simple mary...

                              

Father let her merrily merry be...but let her not marry ...for she is the light of your mystery...help cease her confused mind from earthly worry...

wash her far away from faaaaaar away from                Pilate's soap and water mockery from the land to the sea...kindly end her misery...

and mum and dad...

know this that i love you dearly...

May Heaven forgive me...

          'my time has come.....

  it has almost ended!' 

 I must now hurry...

 

                      

Author's Note

Inspired by a poet friend at WC

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

The beauty of such artwork never ceases to amaze me, dear poet.

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

1. Your AlienGod has not forsaken you.
2. Your AlienGod has e m b r a c e d you.
3. Your AlienGod is an Ancient Alien from the History Channel.

love,
ria

p.s. Wonderful work:D twas all she wrote

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hey you are very kind
you have undewrstood
artwork is from net but i felt it should be included here...
aliengods come in all shapes and sizes:)

[Vria P Crow]

You are a kind soul as well. You rescued me when I first came here to the Cafe...

u r beauty

in the eyes of nature.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

oh but i forgot this rescue...?
lol
thx all the same

[Vria P Crow]

hehe It's okay; your an alien so naturally you have many thoughts.

I'm but a fly upon your door step;
it wants you to pet
the whittle maggot ;)

hehe She is actually a Lion.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

is the lion asalam?

[Vria P Crow]

haha Do you mean a lamb?

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

asalam as in the lion in narnia?

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHA oh I am silly. Yes, precisely.

[Vria P Crow]

His name would be Asland.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

oh sory..i guess i had heard wronf yes asland it is

[Vria P Crow]

haha I forget names allll the time! I focus more on the image rather than names.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thaz good too in a wy or other

[quinfinn]

an inspired and intoxicating write. well penned!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

It was a moment of desperation laced with other-world peace in cohesion.
Thanks Quinfinn im glad u found it so:)

[quinfinn]

you're welcome. an enjoyable write!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes

[Becky C Strukamp]

That inspiration sparked a wonderful piece. Most excellent! You do have a magical way with words and I always enjoy reading you!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

You were always around to make me feel good about myself...
and its always inspiring to have you drop in to visit as you pass by WC
thank you a zillion Becky

[Becky C Strukamp]

You are ever so welcome my dear.! I was happy to see the read request!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i dont send requests anymore....except for this one now...i felt i had to see my friends read this one last time

[Becky C Strukamp]

I'm so glad you did. It was well composed. You have an amazing talent my friend.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:) wow thatnk u for the vote

[Muse]

The end times great deception...these things you speak of are the nephilim.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:)
You are aware of them...
they have appeared in my homeland for centuries...they still do... rumored to be over 20 feet high and awe-inspiring!! :) How are you TCL?

[Muse]

so we are on the same page. :))

very well thank you.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

little David fights mighty Goliath (nephilm-human hybrid child)?
hmmm
yeas..
snakebite ...right?

[Muse]

yes exactly

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

#_#

[Holly Mason]

fanning the light
your friend Holly

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

its about time...i was starting to worry...about u...now that u r here..i need not fear

[Corset]

you are bloody mad, but for some reason I adore you :)

[Corset]

This poem is fabulous :)I love the quotes , for anyone who isn't aware that was what jesus said because weighted with "our sins' he became an abomination to god, as he could no longer look upon jesus since God is perfect and Jesus was then tainted by us, I just wanted anyone reading this to fully understand the brilliance of this write...oh and bite me :) oxoxoxoxox

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

she hit the nail on the head
is it the same as nailing someone to the cross?
wonder if thisll make her cross with me?

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol...you know its mutual and it dont make me blush too much either...

[Corset]

lol, you are too funny, I was just enjoying your videos my friend, You babies are so beautiful, you totally ARE a rockstar huh? LOl, My favs were the bass solo of course, rocking a bass like a lead guitar that is sooooo you, and then Here comes the sun, all time fav..ok happy now? Kiss your wife and your babies and say a sweet prayer for you are so blessed, and YOU know it, you beter know it...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

if you feel that way....then i will just say...you are special to me too

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

that shudavve read....you too are special to me

[Chris]

The simplicity of Faith and Belief...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Hello sir you are here once again and i thank you for your kind visit.

[rhythm&blues]

It's different, not sure I understand it except for some references to endings of some sort.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thats just fine too...as long as u go through the piece:) thxx

[Emily B]

this reminds me of an old WC friend . . . always loved his light-filled astral galaxy work

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hello EMILY ....LONGTIME LOL:)

[Emily B]

i wander off sometimes

to think and stuff

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

enuf thinkin...now walk right back...

[Emily B]

you are exactly right :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

where were u lost all these months

[Emily B]

ah, to speak of that place would make it more real for those who see the word that describes it :) best to leave it unsaid

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Narnia seems childsplay!!

[Emily B]

i agree

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

u better:)

[Emily B]

sat up with anna's sick kitty last night, took a couple of naps today, back to work tomorrow :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

the feline better not waste one o those seven life times now:)

[Emily B]

kitten won't make it, but i kept it company last night

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is something unique.
In general, it speaks about the end of one's misery...the end of one's life.
Thanks for sharing this.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hello Dhaye and thx for commenting

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love the references to Jesus, Mary Magdalene, and Pilate in this piece, creating the crucifixion story. the AlienGod.. the star-child.. these are references I have heard from writers like Erich von Däniken, Zechariah Sitchin, and David Icke. I've never seen the first piece of art, but the second one comes from a Middle English painting (I believe) where these beings in space ships are shown in the top and bottom corners of the painting, depicting that alien visitors could have been around in those days. So spaceman, your tale is very interesting and I enjoyed all of the references within. Thank you for an enjoyable ride!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ahhhh you are welcome and very Lori....
yes u r so right..
but i could not be very discreet...
u swept the me outta my feet

[Ravyne Hawke]

Oh I swept you outta your feet... I hope that wasn't a bad thing! But I am glad I caught some of your meaning. Thanks!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol...no in a good way yes

[Ravyne Hawke]

Oh well then, you are welcome.. lol

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thats fine too