It has ended

'my time has come.....it has ended'

 

Eli Eli Sabachthani, my AlienGod...

why have you forsaken me!? 

To be ridiculed and spat-at by those who once welcomed me warmly?

    To taste stinging vinegar to numb this excruciating pain...?

to have it dabbed on these bloody wounds to sting my flesh  again...??

the lashing didn't hurt as much as did the pouring rain of tears she shed in vain...
Magdalene was she and not my mother’s God-child but may be my god your own star-child she just might be...though simply named Mary...poor simple mary...

                              

Father let her merrily merry be...but let her not marry ...for she is the light of your mystery...help cease her confused mind from earthly worry...

wash her far away from faaaaaar away from                Pilate's soap and water mockery from the land to the sea...kindly end her misery...

and mum and dad...

know this that i love you dearly...

May Heaven forgive me...

          'my time has come.....

  it has almost ended!' 

 I must now hurry...

 

                      

Author's Note

Inspired by a poet friend at WC

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

The beauty of such artwork never ceases to amaze me, dear poet.

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

1. Your AlienGod has not forsaken you.
2. Your AlienGod has e m b r a c e d you.
3. Your AlienGod is an Ancient Alien from the History Channel.

love,
ria

p.s. Wonderful work:D twas all she wrote

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hey you are very kind
you have undewrstood
artwork is from net but i felt it should be included here...
aliengods come in all shapes and sizes:)

[Vria P Crow]

You are a kind soul as well. You rescued me when I first came here to the Cafe...

u r beauty

in the eyes of nature.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

oh but i forgot this rescue...?
lol
thx all the same

[Vria P Crow]

hehe It's okay; your an alien so naturally you have many thoughts.

I'm but a fly upon your door step;
it wants you to pet
the whittle maggot ;)

hehe She is actually a Lion.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

is the lion asalam?

[Vria P Crow]

haha Do you mean a lamb?

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

asalam as in the lion in narnia?

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHA oh I am silly. Yes, precisely.

[Vria P Crow]

His name would be Asland.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

oh sory..i guess i had heard wronf yes asland it is

[Vria P Crow]

haha I forget names allll the time! I focus more on the image rather than names.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thaz good too in a wy or other

[Brad]

i have always wanted to open a poem exactly like that...damn! absolutely powerful

[Ruth]

Tangible and good to see you :)

[icelandicblue]

I can only hope that the road to suffering leads to a better place. I am moved by your poem.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

being an empath you will feel for many like the way you feel for me and i am moved to by your kind words

[InsanityWriter]

Very interesting. (: I liked how you worked it. ^_^ Good work!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i am happy for your like and interest and again i am grateful for your kind visit

[KAOlmsted]

A truly unique piece...but then I expect nothing less from your pen. Well done.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i am glad my pen lived up to your expectations. Pls thank you from me for being my friend.

[KAOlmsted]

It always does...and it is my absolute pleasure!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:)

[Tina Kline]

I like this. Very engaging indeed. I like the layout you used as well. Nicely done.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank u Tina...now u know we are 2 peas in a pod...

[smilempsn]

A story that flowed like a poem... hmm strong n nicely portrayed..

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

strength failed but in faith the mind dwelled

[smilempsn]

^-^

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

nice cricket bat with goggles

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU B-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

granpa will be mighty upset, granny...moreso

[smilempsn]

eXcuse me... whom did you called Granny ??? was that supposed to be me ????

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

no not you....i actually forgot why i said what i said

[smilempsn]

hmm.. 8 - )
I guess ur a sure of a granny/grand pa age, that u forget things so easily :P

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

can be can be not memory is 50/50

[smilempsn]

:P :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

-=-

[TL Boehm]

the lashing didn't hurt as much as did the pouring rain of tears she shed in vain...

This is inarticulately profound.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thank you friend Boehm...it will identify i am sure:)

[Poe Redd]

Wow a park ride of a poem, I enjoyed it! Especially the part about Mary. That was beautiful.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Dear Poe i have seen you after ages.welcome to my pages:)