A wonderful message. The first poem of yours that I read (I don't usually read stories) and it has such a simple message presented openly for everyone to receive. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Some cannot find beauty in much of anything, still there are others that find beauty in everything. Our skin is only shaped to be a covering - our soul, that is where beauty lies in all of us. When a beautiful soul touches, ignites, it is a hard thing to forget :)
Thank you for the invitation - I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Hello Sera,
I am grateful to you for this surprise visit to my page.
And marvel at the w.. read moreHello Sera,
I am grateful to you for this surprise visit to my page.
And marvel at the way you reviewed in simple words.
It is a day to cherish and a new dawn awakens me though i have not rested my head on the pillow yet.
As i read your words of encouragement.
I am indebted!
Beauty goes beyond the mere sight of what is revealed. It lies deep within the core of a Soul, which in each person, each creature, all species, beauty exists. All is beautiful in my eyes and you my dearest Alienbaba are one of the most beautiful Souls I have had the pleasure to be blessed to witness. This piece is full of wisdom and Love, as are you.
I love THIS and You my Buddy!
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11 Years Ago
It is good you recognize this truth too...
and extemporize on its vast territory...
I am.. read moreIt is good you recognize this truth too...
and extemporize on its vast territory...
I am always there to comfort when a poet starts to worry:)
Always you take the time to make my day.
May the Snake God Nagraj of the subterranean lands bless your way.
Love you Buddy! Always.
BTW, you were right about the Owl, yet I believe she is warning.... No.. read moreLove you Buddy! Always.
BTW, you were right about the Owl, yet I believe she is warning.... Not predicting Love. For she was right but I am not DONE:)
an optimistic snake, really charmed ( no pun intended) certainly beautiful to touch and feel, a fresh insight in to this snake's vanity ( who can blame her), I like
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11 Years Ago
Ah Sheema...it's just a mute poor thing...
:)
Thank you
well penned and uplifting. I guess I've never stopped to consider a snake beautiful but it is. A nice poetic lesson here.
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yes miss Snakes are so unfortunate that they crawl on their bellies and slither in the mud the poor .. read moreyes miss Snakes are so unfortunate that they crawl on their bellies and slither in the mud the poor critters. I cant say honestly that a cobra with a raised hood will not give me the shudders but then looking at this particular species i just decided to look twice...and thank you for your nice words and be safe in an infested world even be it colorfully filled but with Angels and demons.
I love your work. Do you appreciate beauty for beauty's sake or let beauty appreciate you for God's sake? Add one word to sake and you have a snake...:)
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I like the beauty that your eyes beam...
i like the way that you shout in your dream
i k.. read moreI like the beauty that your eyes beam...
i like the way that you shout in your dream
i know you like the sound of the Oud go tim-tim-tim
Beauty is the snake in me appreciating the God in you for everyone's sake.
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Hahaha...I knew you will come up with something brilliant ...Truly enjoyable...:)
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*_*
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^^~^^ :)
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Do you have a flute for snake charming? It is an art...:)
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Yes I had a PUNGI (snake-charmers flute with coconut shell and bee wax) but I gave it away to a frie.. read moreYes I had a PUNGI (snake-charmers flute with coconut shell and bee wax) but I gave it away to a friend:) Though i would play it...it would take my breath away...
I dunno about the snake's reaction to my playing though
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hahaha...Good to know...:)
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I remember the day a rat-snake stood in the neighbors compound and looked me in the eye as if tellin.. read moreI remember the day a rat-snake stood in the neighbors compound and looked me in the eye as if telling me something...i looked back ...but i couldn't connect at that precious moment...
I have history with snakes ...one day i hope to write some episodes
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