My home

My home

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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Why do i feel I have lived here...zillions of years before.. Before they say Earth existed..at the threshold of Time's own door.. this STONE-Hut...my home...my Heart.

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© 2013 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
Why?
Am i struck-dumb...in your divine presence..
Oh my Home...,my shelter...my own!

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What was this structure originally used for? Is it a shrine? A tomb? A quiet place to meditate?

-curious-

Posted 11 Years Ago


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poetry kiddo.

The stone of cobblestone
is beauty in the thin air;
oh what a little snare.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vria P Crow

11 Years Ago

haha Yes. Us writers admire our bodies as art forms:D
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

fine art that
Vria P Crow

11 Years Ago

:D
It is a quaint structure with a rich history. A perfect refuge for soul's restoration and renewal.

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
smiles
yes and this was a pair poem for the one about the snake being a beaut.. read more
what a beautiful home, I can see why you are drawn to it, Amazing those columns when was this built?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

Hi Corset yes its loverly!
This was constructed in another place out of late-rite stones over .. read more
Corset

11 Years Ago

what did they move it? who moved it? was it in danger and if they dismantled it then technically it .. read more
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

It was falling to pieces where it was due to neglect, jungle growing in, climatic conditions and ina.. read more
I could say the same about the magic of your work...very special! got me right there!

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

yes its true its magical my world and you
Do you live where the heart lives or reside where faith takes you?
Namaste...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

And that is pro bono...:)
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

I am just Rockstarmono
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Hahaha. You always want to get the last word...:)
A quiet place to meditate and chant Om Nam Shiva

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brandon S. Whitten

11 Years Ago

I know:)
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

Thanku
Brandon S. Whitten

11 Years Ago

Namaste
This reminds me of a mausoleum...peaceful, a place to have your final rest...I'm sure, by reading what you've written about this place, that this is not what you have in mind, but it was the first thing that popped into mine ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

Such a beautiful deciphered review of the image Ka.
It may very well be a mausoleum too...
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KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Nice...
I can understand your pre-visions very well... it has something we all yearn for. Simplicity, in rest of mind.... ;) awesome!

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

You know me the way only you can...like soil and lawn
You shall know me then too..long after I.. read more

11 Years Ago

;)
I like the setting around this house. It is like it is inviting you to enter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

yes very much....except for the cobra that sits insdide next to the altar inside:)

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