I am your child mother (spoken word)

A tearful farewell to the Universal mother (The beautiful picture from Madhuri Geluk at http://tantric-art.com/ I pray the mother blesses the artist abundantly) mp3 free download below.

Thank you mother...I am your only child, I belong to you!

It is all good what you say of me...

You have a right to... I am your creation...

You are the all-pervading Cosmos and I am just a tiny Photon particle...

But nonetheless my dear mother, an integral part of you...

How can I find the right words to express to you...

How your terrible wrath towards me is fully justified...

Or how to calmly convince and assure you mother...

That I wholly understand you and solemnly promise you...

That I shall respect you for eternity... my Third-Eye beholds your holy face and my starved soul basks in your sublime grace...

And as I lie helplessly trapped under your Lotus feet...

I beg you kindly to forgive me for my childish ways...

And having appealed thus to your luminous being in my last dying breath...

I Bless you whole-heartily since I am your own flesh and bid you this tearful goodbye forever mother...

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Author's Note

A tearful farewell to the Universal mother

(The beautiful picture from Madhuri Geluk at http://tantric-art.com/
I pray the mother blesses the artist abundantly)

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

This has a very new-age feel to it. Very interesting, I loved the mp3!
"You are the all-pervading Cosmos and I am just a tiny Photon particle..." ~ I love that. And I like how you add a sort of mother's discipline to it... not negative, but for instance "How your terrible wrath towards me is fully justified..." sounds to me like a mother disciplining her child for his/her own good. I'm really enjoying your poetry, it's quite beautiful.
Thanks so much for making the mp3 a free download~ I really appreciate that. I've saved it to my library.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Helo Moody Thursday, happy Sunday to you.
Yes you have got the idea behind the poem right!
read moreHelo Moody Thursday, happy Sunday to you.
Yes you have got the idea behind the poem right!
The mp3 is new-age genre and a few more for free download coming up besides "when enlightenment rings" and "i am alienbaba" which have been posted here earlier.
Yes a mother has a right to disciplining her child...but here this disciplining factor is the moment of dark-death itself where one is driven to take ones own life or in the moment of a terrible unexpected life-taking accident...pre-determined by the karma that mother sowed in the child's DNA at birth. also inspired by Jobs book...book of job...which was part of my education..but here the child is not complaining at all....only asking forgiveness and gently forgiving her...even though he lies at her feet about to be trampled to death...the one in question under her feet is the biggest GOD of the Hindu Pantheon...Bhole-nath,Shankar, Mahadev, Shiva, few of his names.so angry that when he dances...the age of an era comes to an end...but so humble...that he would chant a death song to the universal mother he himself created...well its a paradox...and i hope to explain in a sequel if you would like me too...ahh...well...its a paradox which is the secret of life and death itself...and everyone knows it in their being...but never delve on it...i am very happy you posted your review...it strengthens me in this moment pregnant with dilemma and as i bless you abundantly i hope to write on encouraged by your august presence and support on this fairyland website WCafe.

[khalid]

mothers represent the real true love, they give but they never wait for return. and as it was said, heaven is under the feet of mothers..greetings to all the world mothers starting from Eve till the little mother you have mentioned here

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes the greeting will be appreciated form her side i am sure....thank you Khalid

[Emma "Joe" Ford]

Grammatically speaking, it's incorrect to have more or less than three periods/full stops for an Ellipsis. (Blah blah blah[...])

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

please treat this as a hapless child's bawling Emma....: thank you

[Emma "Joe" Ford]

Well, these are supposed to be reviews. As such, I am reviewing something which could improve the poem. I didn't mean any offence, I was just trying to help. (By the way, it's spelled "helpless", not hapless.)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes teacher:::
lol
Yes..i am always looking for mentors to help me on my way...i really appreciate your correction...your taking the time to guide me is more than i could wish for...I am learning...I am. :) Thank you...I shall be glad if you drop by more often and thank you!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Hi Emma, I read up what an ellipsis means...like you said 3 dots after a sentence. But my intentional series of dots do not comply with that description....beacuse I use the dots to imply something else...maybe i am juts to much used to doting...lol...

[Emma "Joe" Ford]

I'd still recommend using just the three dots, anyway. Most other pieces I've read (either poetry or story) use three dots, since it is considered grammatically correct overall. Nevertheless, use what you wish.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ok i will use 3 dots like you say.
i think its a good idea....and hey do listen to the updated soken word version mp3 or download at http://www.reverbnation.com/rockstarmono/song/16053831-i-am-your-child-mother thx

[Jack...]

A fond farewell to the beauty of all things, though you will find that exquisite loveliness now grows within her shadows.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Glad you see it that way Jack...its a nice compliment to her...:thx

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this to me has many meanings, i see it as mother earth and how we abuse her constantly...yet she still gives us what we need when we need it.

but we are like spoiled children who just take take take..and never give back.

jacob

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you Jacob ...yes it can mean this too...more than the other meanings..
though if i really told what prompted me to write it is another thing altogether ...
thank you for your nice words.

[Becky C Strukamp]

This is outstanding kiddo! I am speechless at the moment as it was touching and heart rendering. What a lovely farewell.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Hi Beck..yes its a piece which came up spontaneously..in a moment of weakness...thx

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

In a moment of great hurt and humbling ....
Now!