I am your child mother (spoken word)

A tearful farewell to the Universal mother (The beautiful picture from Madhuri Geluk at http://tantric-art.com/ I pray the mother blesses the artist abundantly) mp3 free download below.

Thank you mother...I am your only child, I belong to you!

It is all good what you say of me...

You have a right to... I am your creation...

You are the all-pervading Cosmos and I am just a tiny Photon particle...

But nonetheless my dear mother, an integral part of you...

How can I find the right words to express to you...

How your terrible wrath towards me is fully justified...

Or how to calmly convince and assure you mother...

That I wholly understand you and solemnly promise you...

That I shall respect you for eternity... my Third-Eye beholds your holy face and my starved soul basks in your sublime grace...

And as I lie helplessly trapped under your Lotus feet...

I beg you kindly to forgive me for my childish ways...

And having appealed thus to your luminous being in my last dying breath...

I Bless you whole-heartily since I am your own flesh and bid you this tearful goodbye forever mother...

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Author's Note

A tearful farewell to the Universal mother

(The beautiful picture from Madhuri Geluk at http://tantric-art.com/
I pray the mother blesses the artist abundantly)

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

This has a very new-age feel to it. Very interesting, I loved the mp3!
"You are the all-pervading Cosmos and I am just a tiny Photon particle..." ~ I love that. And I like how you add a sort of mother's discipline to it... not negative, but for instance "How your terrible wrath towards me is fully justified..." sounds to me like a mother disciplining her child for his/her own good. I'm really enjoying your poetry, it's quite beautiful.
Thanks so much for making the mp3 a free download~ I really appreciate that. I've saved it to my library.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Helo Moody Thursday, happy Sunday to you.
Yes you have got the idea behind the poem right!
read moreHelo Moody Thursday, happy Sunday to you.
Yes you have got the idea behind the poem right!
The mp3 is new-age genre and a few more for free download coming up besides "when enlightenment rings" and "i am alienbaba" which have been posted here earlier.
Yes a mother has a right to disciplining her child...but here this disciplining factor is the moment of dark-death itself where one is driven to take ones own life or in the moment of a terrible unexpected life-taking accident...pre-determined by the karma that mother sowed in the child's DNA at birth. also inspired by Jobs book...book of job...which was part of my education..but here the child is not complaining at all....only asking forgiveness and gently forgiving her...even though he lies at her feet about to be trampled to death...the one in question under her feet is the biggest GOD of the Hindu Pantheon...Bhole-nath,Shankar, Mahadev, Shiva, few of his names.so angry that when he dances...the age of an era comes to an end...but so humble...that he would chant a death song to the universal mother he himself created...well its a paradox...and i hope to explain in a sequel if you would like me too...ahh...well...its a paradox which is the secret of life and death itself...and everyone knows it in their being...but never delve on it...i am very happy you posted your review...it strengthens me in this moment pregnant with dilemma and as i bless you abundantly i hope to write on encouraged by your august presence and support on this fairyland website WCafe.

[An owl on the moon]

What a personal, beautiful dedication... confessions of life and love and the seasons of the soul.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Hello Craig am joyous to see you reply and hope you are having a great life. Thanks you for your few but kind words.

[Richard Man]

Your royal Zaniness, your fire is crackling and comforting don't douse it with the tears of regret nor piss on it because of others.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Have taken note of your suggestion sir...
thx very much!

[I, Rene]

Metaphorically I would hope this farewell, your art is always so vibrant and mystical.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I dunno RO...but there is a conspiracy in here....i wudnt like to be part of...
so i just might go....i thought better to give a hintto those who would miss me..
the art is by the painter from Ireland...Madhuri...i found it on the net...and its vibrant yes....and i am going to try to paint it myself...too...she is KALI-MA,,,,the Goddess who is mother of all Tantrics!
thx:)

[I, Rene]

I imagine you will do a wonderful justice to her, hopefully you will paint and come back and post your own art here, It would give it that must more originality. I'd love to see it.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes Ren....im definitly replacing all the downloaded art in my poems/stories in here...with my own art ....i hardly know to sketch but it will be my original work...thx for the support.

[I, Rene]

:) I look forward to viewing them :)

[Nick.B]

Very sad and very well written poem about well...all of us (creation)...great job

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Nick....yes glad you think that way...in a way I spoke on everyones behalf too...a prayer just before the apocalypse

[Salar Majak]

so very sad, a beautiful tribuite. kudos.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I know...it made me emotional too....after writing it...thx Aurora

[Silhouette]

Written very radiantly and it is so sad. Great write, thank you for penning.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

As always Sil....my gratitude for the encouragement...:
Its a heart song in the last moments..

[Silhouette]

You did a good job with it…you are welcome :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

u know...i edited it 13 times...lol trying to find the right things to say....read it again? its changed...thx lol

[Silhouette]

Just reread it, and this version is pretty amazing, too.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

doesnt she seem scary to you? even the 330 million Gods of Indian mythology as well as the demons are scared of her form...

[Silhouette]

yes, she's very scary. i dont wanna get on her bad side lol

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

there u r

[Holly Mason]

well written piece thank you

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks you Holly for the appreciation.

[creativequill]

very good piece, very sad, still wonderful to read

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am happy you saw the wonder in the sadness CQ....thanku

[creativequill]

Anytime :)

[CS]

There is so much sadness to this, Kiddo. As children, we all hurt our mother sometimes. Do you think she would hold it against you? Any of her children? We can feel guilty but I think a mother always knows her child's heart. This is a very heartfelt apology. You are a beautiful little photon :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes she is holding it against me Courtney....see the cyclones, tornadoes, hurricanes, tsunamic, forest-fres, earth quakes, wars, bombings, arson, stock-markey collapses, separation of couples, families split, murders, invasion of womens modesty using brute force and savage behavior, death of chivalry....all these are the Mothers ways of telling me...she is paying me back with huge interest...she is holding it against me...I am her only child....there is no onle else...any different...cause all of us photons are clones of each other..and we are divinely beautiful but oh so sensitive:)
Thank you Courtney.....

[Be myself!]

Well, this is different

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes...its emotion in motion ...thx

[Be myself!]

Yep. I like it. Your welcome

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:)

[Be myself!]

:)