I am your child mother (spoken word)

A tearful farewell to the Universal mother (The beautiful picture from Madhuri Geluk at http://tantric-art.com/ I pray the mother blesses the artist abundantly) mp3 free download below.

Thank you mother...I am your only child, I belong to you!

It is all good what you say of me...

You have a right to... I am your creation...

You are the all-pervading Cosmos and I am just a tiny Photon particle...

But nonetheless my dear mother, an integral part of you...

How can I find the right words to express to you...

How your terrible wrath towards me is fully justified...

Or how to calmly convince and assure you mother...

That I wholly understand you and solemnly promise you...

That I shall respect you for eternity... my Third-Eye beholds your holy face and my starved soul basks in your sublime grace...

And as I lie helplessly trapped under your Lotus feet...

I beg you kindly to forgive me for my childish ways...

And having appealed thus to your luminous being in my last dying breath...

I Bless you whole-heartily since I am your own flesh and bid you this tearful goodbye forever mother...

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Author's Note

A tearful farewell to the Universal mother

(The beautiful picture from Madhuri Geluk at http://tantric-art.com/
I pray the mother blesses the artist abundantly)

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

This has a very new-age feel to it. Very interesting, I loved the mp3!
"You are the all-pervading Cosmos and I am just a tiny Photon particle..." ~ I love that. And I like how you add a sort of mother's discipline to it... not negative, but for instance "How your terrible wrath towards me is fully justified..." sounds to me like a mother disciplining her child for his/her own good. I'm really enjoying your poetry, it's quite beautiful.
Thanks so much for making the mp3 a free download~ I really appreciate that. I've saved it to my library.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Helo Moody Thursday, happy Sunday to you.
Yes you have got the idea behind the poem right!
read moreHelo Moody Thursday, happy Sunday to you.
Yes you have got the idea behind the poem right!
The mp3 is new-age genre and a few more for free download coming up besides "when enlightenment rings" and "i am alienbaba" which have been posted here earlier.
Yes a mother has a right to disciplining her child...but here this disciplining factor is the moment of dark-death itself where one is driven to take ones own life or in the moment of a terrible unexpected life-taking accident...pre-determined by the karma that mother sowed in the child's DNA at birth. also inspired by Jobs book...book of job...which was part of my education..but here the child is not complaining at all....only asking forgiveness and gently forgiving her...even though he lies at her feet about to be trampled to death...the one in question under her feet is the biggest GOD of the Hindu Pantheon...Bhole-nath,Shankar, Mahadev, Shiva, few of his names.so angry that when he dances...the age of an era comes to an end...but so humble...that he would chant a death song to the universal mother he himself created...well its a paradox...and i hope to explain in a sequel if you would like me too...ahh...well...its a paradox which is the secret of life and death itself...and everyone knows it in their being...but never delve on it...i am very happy you posted your review...it strengthens me in this moment pregnant with dilemma and as i bless you abundantly i hope to write on encouraged by your august presence and support on this fairyland website WCafe.

[AYVID N]

Maternal love transcends all of Universe. You say it very well here.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you for understanding the sentiment expressed here:)

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful poem. :) Excellent write! ^_^

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thx IW I made it to p[lase all the feminine members in here:)

[Margarette]

This is a lovely and heartwarming piece! You have written such a beautiful prayer that holds strong emotions that can reach the heavens. Nicely done!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes that was the intent....hoping the alphabets, the consonents, the vowels and everything in between silence and sound would float up and someone would collect them in a ether-net:)
thx Marge you are too kind

[Dalia]

so touching and sensitive indeed
thanks for sharing this

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am thankful for your precious presence at my page:)

[Dalia]

you are welcome, like to see your lovely presence at my page ^_^

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i shall materialize there often thx for the welcome

[Dalia]

please do, am a new writer and it'll be great to hear what do you think of my writings

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

im just a simple writer who likes to read write and talk but i shall pay u my visit soon thx

[Joe]

Ahhh Yes I Can Relate Lovely Write!

Fav Lines:

"And as I lie helplessly trapped under your Lotus feet...
I beg you kindly to forgive me for my childish ways...
And having appealed thus to your luminous being in my last dying breath..." / (sigh)

Love It Baba!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

just an ardent prayer in at the brink of an era gab:) thanku

[luviva]

ok.. this is soo sad and tearful!!
it nearly brought me to tears..
very good and sensitive write.!
thanxx for the share sweety.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes i try to make them sad:)

[Bluefire]

This is pretty good, though I'm kind of confused seeing as I don't know anything about this mother. I assume she's called "Madhuri Geluk." I will have to read up on her.
The picture is beautiful, and the words are deep, almost pretty sad.
Well done! ^^

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Hi Bluefire,
Maduri is the painter of that picture up there...
This mother ....that i speak of is the cosmic consciousness that decides to discard our earthly body and take birth in another. This the moment of ones death:) Thank you

[Bluefire]

Wow, that's amazing. I'm sorry, I should've read that part at the top more thoroughly. ^^'

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hey its awright...btw i have uploaded the spoken word mp3 here now.

[Bluefire]

Coolio ^^

[Frieda P]

Is this an ode to your artistic mother or a farewell of sorts, I'm not quite sure. Either way, it's deep and moving.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Helo Frieda....do you remember I has written a poem about suicide somwehere here in my posts.....well....i have lost many friends in a manner such....and its frustrating knowing that i was there and could not counsel them....in there....i advised ...them to say alive and gave various reasons why they should. well ...in this poem i wanted to imagine what was their final thought on the verge of that fateful moment.......and this came to mind in a flash...as if a dying final prayer before crossing over. Thanks.

[Frieda P]

Sorry to hear that, I lost my sister to suicide so I fully understand your frustrations and am better able to comprehend this write after that. I am saddened with a new understanding.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am sorry to hear about your sisters passing away too.
This was the link to the other poem http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/roquelazarus/754414/

[Frieda P]

There was a mystical feel to this version, I definitely got the feel of it from listening to the spoken word, very much enjoyed it. Bravo, nice touch!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i did it inspired by your gracious comments....i had to do it fast...cuz today was a nice day but the day wasnt mine...not mine at all.:)
thx

[Frieda P]

I'm jazzed!! It was strangely erotic in a way. Ha, no today was bucket head day...still laughing at that one!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

oway....glad to have u have ur say...though it not the month of may

[patti]

very emotional and deep meaning poem... very good work one of my favs :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx for the kind words Pat...i will replace with my own art work soon

[KAOlmsted]

Very nicely done. Thank you for posting this for us.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am happy you find it that way.
I am happy for the gift of you!