I am Alienbaba

Meditative spoken word poem for your relaxation and peace of mind. Just 11 minutes and you shall feel fine.

http://www.reverbnation.com/rockstarmono/song/15866934-i-am-alienbaba-version-2-meditative

Do not worry...

Don't you shed no precious tear...

 I can comfort you Precious!

‎I am the sun, I am the one,

I am the fire-ball on the run,

I am your bed-tea

when your day has just begun!

And there is no need to hide from someone,

When my heart booms louder than the muzzle of the hunter's Gun!

Take my power...its yours for the taking,

These rays are my fingers..

 This warmth is my breath...

The tan on your skin is my present to you

and though it stings don't you moan..do feel glad.

I am the warm glow that pervades your being,

I am the September rush inside of you,

 I am the thought that makes you feel new,

 I am the color...the mud of the Earth,

‎ I come with valor...to warm your home's hearth

‎ I reside...in the confusion; the midst of your chaos,

I decide ...who comes where and where who goes,

 

I am the Sun, I am the one!

http://youtu.be/WPBUM6AY7YY

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Author's Note

Pls listen to the mp3 too. Thanks!

Reviews

[Nona]

Oh!!!!!!! you ARE the one! this musical meditative poem blew away my mind! it is just hypnotically beautiful and seductive! I love how you married music with poetry to give a birth to this piece which talks about a great mystery... who are you ? - the God of eternal energy...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am very happy you found this poem worthy enough for a review and in your own valuable words you have shown me kindness here. God of eternal energy...yes that thought sounds nice...only if the universe could be saved from collapsing unto itself inversely. As you know...I have no control over anti-matter ...the bane of my existence and the by-product of creation:) But as I said...those are my problems...and i shall take care of you all till the very end.:)

[Nona]

:-) You clearly have giant imagination - bigger than the STAR of the SUN :) take care!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hahah
what lovely words...thxx

[Maria M]

Such a relaxing poem, I loved it!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Glad you loved it...i was relaxed too while reciting...

[KAOlmsted]

Now I'm too relaxed to do anything ;-) I should have saved this one for last. Great work.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

make it your last before retiring to bed:) thxxx

[KAOlmsted]

good advice ;-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

o-o

[Salar Majak]

wwww cute!!!!!!!!! really amazing!!!! hehehehe when i read ''precious'' i read it with a wierd lord of the rings way XD, any ways, great poem i can feel the love here

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Darth vader or some other? lol...thx Aurora

[Salar Majak]

hehehehe yup yup

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Such a very relaxing write, and filled with love.
The Mp3, makes it so psychedelic again,
It reminds me of Sphongle in a positive way,
Thank you so much for sharing.

- Elisa

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thx Eliza...im doing what comes to mind,.....and hope it benifits someone...more to come soon:)

[Richard Man]

I am the reader and the listener warmed and calmed by your words. I have missed the sun for the last six months, so, thank you. मैं आपको धन्यवाद देता हूं, श्री सनशाइन

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Wow! Richard ...your Hindi is excellent:)
The poem is a twin-edged sword and sometimes its good to think of the listener as the Sun....then it makes complete sense.....thank you

[Richard Man]

Confession time! Because you used the word alienbaba I assumed you had Hindu connections. Though it doesn;t always work I used google translate. As an exercise I put in a speech from Shakespeare's play "All's well that ends well".... All the World's a Stage and I went from English to French to Hungarian to Russian to Hindi and back to English. ... my god what a meaningless funny mess it was. Sounds like the UN!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:)
It was fab and well worth the effort in your pursuit!
I know many 'babas' have been traveled from India to your parts and have amalgamated into your society and culture there...some successfully so, and phenomenal at that .....and others whose racket has been busted through and through....
In India, in Hindi...."Baba" is what we fondly call our father or an elderly stranger too....but in GOA where i come from "BABA" is a respected word for elder brother....or even a mother can called her eldest born son...baba...or younger siblings do too...lol...so...I know i am not of this Earth....but yet i am the baba to you all...what i speak and write here...is a reflection of your own glory and intelligence you once beamed me...aeons ago...

[Toni]

I really like this, it was very relaxing and the mp3, was great as well.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you Antonette i am glad you heard it and pls download and keep the track for you and circulate it if u feel like.

[Toni]

Will do!

[I, Rene]

It was very relaxing, some fab lines such as , "I am the September rush inside of you" and I can comfort you precious
‎I am the sun, I am the one
I am the fire-ball on the run,
I am your bed-tea"
beautiful, meditative, extremely creative.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks Rene...the september rush line is my fav too and inspired by the movie "august rush":)

[I, Rene]

really, I haven't seen that one, it must be a good one if it inspired you, will have to check it out.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

pls do

[Jack...]

Nice one, I will listen to the mp3 when I get home this evening.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes please

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

tell me if u found it helpful as a meditative catalyst...between your senses and the environment around you

[Jack...]

Very cool and meditative. I listened, looked, felt and learned. It was spiritual in a sweet sense, scented of jasmine I think.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Your 3rd eye is opened kind sir!
IT WAS a jasmine "agarbathi" scented incensce smurf stick that was lit in the corridor ....the last one...and i recorded this mp3 siting with my studio laptop in the small hall...

[patti]

I have listened to the mp3 too... I have to say it really good poem and the mp3 is very relaxing to listen i have to say, it has good rhythm to it too

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am so glad you heard it

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I will post the video soon...but lookin for a nice female model:) anyone interested?