Oh!!!!!!! you ARE the one! this musical meditative poem blew away my mind! it is just hypnotically beautiful and seductive! I love how you married music with poetry to give a birth to this piece which talks about a great mystery... who are you ? - the God of eternal energy...
I am very happy you found this poem worthy enough for a review and in your own valuable words you ha.. read moreI am very happy you found this poem worthy enough for a review and in your own valuable words you have shown me kindness here. God of eternal energy...yes that thought sounds nice...only if the universe could be saved from collapsing unto itself inversely. As you know...I have no control over anti-matter ...the bane of my existence and the by-product of creation:) But as I said...those are my problems...and i shall take care of you all till the very end.:)
11 Years Ago
:-) You clearly have giant imagination - bigger than the STAR of the SUN :) take care!
I am a child of the sun. My gleaming brown skin tells it all. Your poem created a connection between me and the universe and it imparts new life or vigor to my consciousness.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
u r always a part of the whole never to be forgotten or separated from
Happy to find you hypnotized...but come back to...now...:) after the lucid-dream.
11 Years Ago
All three eyes are now open and focused. Thank you for your dream thoughts.
11 Years Ago
There is another dimension to the opening of the 3rd eye...and that is deep empathy....please be pre.. read moreThere is another dimension to the opening of the 3rd eye...and that is deep empathy....please be prepared for this. Do not carry much money on you when you walk by the parks and places where less fortunate people live on streets begging for alms. There are chances that you will give them all you have...even the credit card:) why you will say ...here take my purse...too..I find this quite natural when it happens to me...and though i have a lot of explaining to do to the missus...about where the rent money i was taking to the bank to deposit ion the landlady's account got diverted..its all good...specially since...it always comes from another source....and expenses are met in time...almost magically... finance appears...the 3rd eye opening also takes care of its owner... doesn't leave him/her in the lurch...
hey, listening to Switchfoot's MeanT To Live right now so I didn't hear your mp3 but it goes quite nicely with this exuberant love song to Life! More Power to ya, Brother!
Also reminded me of another song, Shambala...."You can tell my brother by the flowers in his eyes..." yes.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
aha!
you sis are the one being spoken to in question! gotcha
simple...i was talking in this poem to any woman in the world who wud want to be reassured she is sa.. read moresimple...i was talking in this poem to any woman in the world who wud want to be reassured she is safe ok and fine in this world...since i think of my sis....who wud be desolate sometimes....when in sorrow.......since u called me bro! think i am speaking to you. Power to you sis!
11 Years Ago
Amen to tha, Brother Sun. You make me think of a reggae band under an orange velvet sky sharin' the .. read moreAmen to tha, Brother Sun. You make me think of a reggae band under an orange velvet sky sharin' the love wit all who go by...ah I feel a poem coming on!!
11 Years Ago
write on write on...i shall shine on ur poetry-land after lady moon has done her duty
Oh!!!!!!! you ARE the one! this musical meditative poem blew away my mind! it is just hypnotically beautiful and seductive! I love how you married music with poetry to give a birth to this piece which talks about a great mystery... who are you ? - the God of eternal energy...
I am very happy you found this poem worthy enough for a review and in your own valuable words you ha.. read moreI am very happy you found this poem worthy enough for a review and in your own valuable words you have shown me kindness here. God of eternal energy...yes that thought sounds nice...only if the universe could be saved from collapsing unto itself inversely. As you know...I have no control over anti-matter ...the bane of my existence and the by-product of creation:) But as I said...those are my problems...and i shall take care of you all till the very end.:)
11 Years Ago
:-) You clearly have giant imagination - bigger than the STAR of the SUN :) take care!
I grew up with a pay it forward mind set...so I wanted to read your work...I understand ungrateful poets that get reviews that don't return the favor, and don't even thank you for it, but times are changing, I guess that's how it goes.
Interestingly whimsical. I Love how it was playful and the song went well with artistic words of tapestry. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you DeValle...whimsical it is...the Sun...is...
i wonder if i could do another spoken wo.. read moreThank you DeValle...whimsical it is...the Sun...is...
i wonder if i could do another spoken word with the same feel...
the inspiration sometimes escapes the moment....
Its good to see you in here and I shall read you soon!
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