None of business

I shouldn't be doing this

WHY DO I POKE MY NOSE IN YOUR AFFAIRS,

IT'S NONE OF MY BUISINESS,

YET I DO...KNOWING  YOU ARE PART OF ME!

Author's Note

Give your harshest criticism please! Thx

Reviews

[Silhouette]

I can't think of anything harsh to say about this piece, because I think it's really good. Maybe a little short, but I'm one of those people who like poems with a little more length. Yet I alo think it's a talent to get the message across using as little words as possible, and this really shows what great talent you have. Great job.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you Sil...i tried to dothat thxx

[I, Rene]

it's only excuse I could come up with. Business is misspelled, although it spelled right the first time, I love the bright colors ^-^

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol intentional

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

to git ur attention..charming one

[Khloevhr]

You ask "Why do I poke my nose in your affairs." May be the fragrant smell or stench of the situation brings on your strongest bloodhound detective. We may be bound by blood or sealed by the need of a protective K9 on to remind us to be on Guard ourselves. Love this piece! :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hhha...you replied fine...sure no more to say?

[Carolann Dowsett]

Very cool, I love the way you admit freely that you know that what you are doing is annoying but then claim your rights because the person is part of you. Nicely written.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes u got me right u did

[Carolann Dowsett]

Good

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

C.D i think yerfine!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Well thank you very much :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Bless you child of the Multiverse!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you, Blessings to you too :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Few words worthy of many a compliments. Sometimes a few words say it best!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

If u said something i wud takeit seriously come on say something

[Becky C Strukamp]

I was saying your few words were worthy of many compliments and that your few words say it just fine!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol....u will never say anything harsh about my work....u r the official guardian of my webpage:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

thank you for honor. I will do guard it proud! :)

[Salar Majak]

:) this is a great powerful poem! i love the pattern of it, very strong

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx girl ...its one of my styles

[Salar Majak]

:)

[Sheila Kline]

You have made a profound statement in only a few words! It is often very difficult to ignore those who are so close to us!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanku ma'am...im glad it was helpful

[teardrop]

criticism, i don't know much about, like what you said!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx....nice to meet u too

[Richard Man]

Yellow Buisiness ... aha symbolic "I" have been stuck in your business!
What a great aphorism.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol...i got u there! hooked in this busyness!