This one does know that he does'nt

Instant

Rambling mind, mumbling brook,

Grumbling behind is the crook!

This one does know that he doesn't,

That one doesn't know he does!

Mind, brook, crook...all bundled together,

Huddled in the canvas of a cyber-book!

This one does know that it isn't,

That one doesn't know that is!

Gambling man, pauper prince,

Naughty fan, Fish without fins,

This one doesn't know what he got,

That one does know what not!

Planet x, Quasar Max,

 Internet-fax, Skip your tax,

Tear your cheques, Straighten your backs, 

Stow the racks, clear the decks,

Pack the smacks, save your Lakhs,

Scare the hacks, jump the Jacks,

Clap the claps, route the maps,

Sleep your naps, help your paps,

greet your chaps, say your raps,

miss the slaps, shut the taps, 

Stop the yaps, give 'em zaps!

They don't know what you are up to,

You do know whatever you have to!

Author's Note

My worse!

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Ah...it was fun to read...you ever listen to some of Bob Dylan's rhymes? They are awful! But at times interspersed with brilliance and always fun. I've been listening to Dylan all morning cleaning house. Neil Young was right, "A Man Needs a Maid!" lol

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Oh Fabian how are you...settled in a new home comfortably now i hope!
Dylans knockin on heavens door awright...lol...
and a new maid shall you be gifted for Christmas from the stars!
Thanks you thank you

[SM Davis]

I like the meter. It reminds me of an exercise in free association.

[Rogue]

I don't think these words mean what you think they mean.
-grin-

This was a fun and twisty read. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

grin-on:)
anything to see a smile on you

[Rogue]

Aww.. You flirt outrageously green guy. :P

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

no its just good wishes:)

[Rogue]

Oh, in that case. Thank you. I shall return one to you..
May your spaceship always remain sturdy and fly true. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes that is what i neeed.... organic Oracle blessings:) thx

[Kenilo Kent]

I didn't notice I was rapping as I read on. Delightful!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

happingrappin'

[Muse]

This one does know that he doesn't,

That one doesn't know he does!

I about choked on my own tongue reading this...but I still love a good zippity zappity tongue twister.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

U mean like the Betty ate the butter and the butter got bitter so please hop in my two sitter and not with my friend Peter or meet me on twitter?!

[Muse]

yeah..what you said? lol

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I said Hi

[Muse]

hi tweetie.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

there she goes....lol

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

so where are u now

[Frieda P]

All the chaos jumbles the mind, which I think might have been your intention here, nonetheless, fun to read!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes...fumbling n jumbling amidst maternal mummblings and kiddos grumblings...yeh it makes me do this:) thx Freida:)

[Frieda P]

ha, sounds like so much fun! at least it gives you inspirations...welcome, my pleasure. :-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

all mine

[Dream Weaver]

Refreshing, entertaining and a great read for your so called worse.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol D.W its a marketing gimick what i do...
haha thx

[Dream Weaver]

Gotta love marketing! :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

o-o

[dreaming dame]

Wow lol I like this:) So cool! I had to read it aloud to keep up with the rhymes:P

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol...glad u r reading it aloud...i wish i cud record u...or cud u record ur voice, upload to free hosting server and send me a link to the mp3...i promise you ...you will be my voice embedded in this text:) thx i am serious

[dreaming dame]

LOL i'm amused at your request, maybe someday I might figure out just how to work it.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

im sure any computer-techie friend can help you record and post:)

[dreaming dame]

Lol yea I suppose they could but then the mystery would be gone:P

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ok...try it yrself

[dreaming dame]

We'll see I guess

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yeh sure

[Chavon]

whatever, ha ha, I liked it, lotsa rhyming happening in there.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i like rymes it makes me feel sillyliily childish in an innocent sorta way...thx

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

this was a fun read PK

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Glad u found it that way Neva

[Salar Majak]

lol, this isn't badas yous say,i really really enjoyedevery moment of reading it, made me smile, i really liked the last two lines, the whole poem holds depth if you read it with a heart. a great one :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thank you Aurora...you are blessed if u saw through the lyric...u r

[Salar Majak]

:) you are welcome