Faith

        Faith

Falling in love with you,

over and over I think of you.

Starting the days with millions of endless wish,

running for it to accomplish.

Feeling that am in heaven,

ofcourse no one knows about it even.

Flirting is not that I’ve aimed,

else am to be blamed.

Need nothing else to define,

all residing in the bright stars knows it fine.

Being so crazy ever, I’ve been,

finally what do I mean?

Daring at last to tell you,

that I really love you…

 

 

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I'll agree it does need a little work and tweaking but it's not a bad write at all. I could still sense the emotion coming through in which you are trying to convey. Keep writing, don't ever stop. Nicely done.

~anna rose

[rony]

thank you for all your valuable review...i will work on it..for better syntax.

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

beautifully written^^

[paradise]

it was nice i liked it

[Morpheus Anderson]

Message is not clear. Try to improve on syntax. Not bad.

[Rhea]

awesome poem...... nicely beaded words.... true feelings and a loving heart... good piece of poetry... :)