Recreate Yourself.

Grow your own heart.

Soak it in gold.

Lock it away.

Do what you're told.

 

Make your own soul.

Inhale bright blue.

Savor the scene.

Forget what to do.

 

Raise your own eyes.

Spill out the pain.

Retry just once.

See what you gain.

 

Write down your words.

Let hands unwind.

Lose haunting fear.

Maybe they'll mind.

 

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Reviews

[recklessfunk]

"Grow your own heart. / Soak it in gold."
I loved those two lines and just the idea of a heart being pure and beautiful when you nurture it yourself.

"Make your own soul. / Inhale bright blue."
Again, beautiful. The bright blue reminds me of a clear spring sky, something so innocent and just overall amazing to look at.

And, of course, the title says it all. Recreating oneself is hard to do, but you've provided a poetic and beautiful way of doing so. Great job! (:

[Kelley]

I like what you did with this rhyming poem.
Thanks for sharing a great poem

Kelley

[watch_the_world]

well written, nice write xD

[Ian Faraway]

Ok, the message seems to be going in like two different directions. I get 'better yourself but don't show it' and 'be who you are but don't'....doesn't make sense but it's the message I'm getting.

[Matthews Reggie]

nice concept.... well written....

[Miss Coral]

Simply stated, but powerful words. Love the rhyme scheme. Great write.

-Coral-

[Hello, Goodbye]

Im totally down with the message.. great stuff..

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

lightly inspiring.....i like the lightness of poem but still inspiring

[Broken Girl]

S**T!!! THIS... This is deep, my friend! Very nice... Very, deep!!!

[Jess.]

Wow, love it!
That's all I have to say :)