Recreate Yourself.

Grow your own heart.

Soak it in gold.

Lock it away.

Do what you're told.

 

Make your own soul.

Inhale bright blue.

Savor the scene.

Forget what to do.

 

Raise your own eyes.

Spill out the pain.

Retry just once.

See what you gain.

 

Write down your words.

Let hands unwind.

Lose haunting fear.

Maybe they'll mind.

 

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Reviews

[recklessfunk]

"Grow your own heart. / Soak it in gold."
I loved those two lines and just the idea of a heart being pure and beautiful when you nurture it yourself.

"Make your own soul. / Inhale bright blue."
Again, beautiful. The bright blue reminds me of a clear spring sky, something so innocent and just overall amazing to look at.

And, of course, the title says it all. Recreating oneself is hard to do, but you've provided a poetic and beautiful way of doing so. Great job! (:

[Bruce]

that is f*****g dope, my favorite is the second stanza for sure!!!

[KellieJeanne]

wow, so beautiful

[Northend]

i like this poem its a great write all the way around !11

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a really great piece. I think this was a great message as well in this poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Randolf Ramos]

What a great wisdom you have shared with us.

[P.S I Love You]

I see alot of emotion in this.. very creative.. enjoyed dearly.

[trainwreck]

Write down your words.
Let hands unwind.
Lose haunting fear.
Maybe they'll mind.

This is so beautiful. Its amazing how you paint a picture, a soft calling dare.

[Bette]

cute. Short and sweet.

[India Brooks]

This is incredible Ronnie. 100 from me! This just made me feel so content :)

[Kerry O'Connor]

What a positive way to begin the day!
This is what I'll take with me:
Grow your own heart
Make your own soul
Raise your own eyes
Write down your words